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satota

April 30, 2023

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Starting English conversation circle

My partner and I have been recently planning to start an English conversation circle for the locals. This is a first try and I'm really excited. One of the biggest issues is my English speaking skill. As a host, I know I have to teach English to our participants and I'm sure most of them would probably be English-learning beginners. Since I've worked as a translator for some years, I think my grammar and writing skill is not so bad but I have little experience in speaking English in a real-life situation.

I need more opportunities to speak English. If my friends here may want to help me improve my English, please contact me. Instead, I'll help you with your Japanese.

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Starting an English cConversation circleGroup

凄い!

「サークル」は英語の「group」に当たる言葉です。

My partner and I recently have been recently planning ton starting an English conversation circlegroup for the locals.

また、

Recently, my partner and I have been planning on starting an English conversation group for the locals.

This is aour first tryattempt and I'm really excited.

また、

This is our first attempt so I'm really excited.

One of the biggest issues is my English speaking skillability to speak English.

気にしないで下さい。

As a host, I know I have to teach English to our participants and I'm sure most of them wouldill probably be English-learning beginners.

Since I've worked as a translator for some years, I think my grammar and writing skill iss are not so bad but I have little experience in speaking English in a real-life situation.

I need more opportunities to speak English.

If my friends here may want to help me improve my English, please contact me.

お願いします!私でよかったら、LangCorrectのディスコードのサーバーで連絡して下さい。

Instead return, I'll help you with your Japanese.

でも、今、言語交換の相手が三人いますが・・・。

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ディスコードでサークルを作ることができます。soraさんというLangCorrectのクリエイターも日本語ができます。都合がよければ、順番に話すかもしれません。

そして、自然な添削をしてみました。よく書けています!

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mari

May 1, 2023

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賛成しました!

My partner and I have been recently been planning to start an English conversation circle for the locals.

This is aour first tryime doing this and I'm really excited.

One of the biggest issues is my English speaking skills.

As a host, I know I have to teach English to our participants and I'm sure most of them would probably be English-learning beginners.

Since I've worked as a translator for some years, I think my grammar and writing skill iss are not so bad, but I have little experience in speaking English in a real-life situation.

I need more opportunities to speak English.

If my friends here may want to help me improve my English, please contact me.

Instead return, I'll help you with your Japanese.

This is aour first try and I'm really excited.

Since I've worked as a translator for some years, I think my grammar and writing skill isare not so bad but I have little experience in speaking English in a real-life situation.

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My partner and I have been recently been planning to start an English conversation circle for the locals.

This sounds a bit more natural to me.

This is a first tryattempt and I'm really excited.

One of the biggest issues is my English speaking skills.

Since I've worked as a translator for some years, I think my grammar and writing skill iss are not so bad but I have little experience in speaking English in a real-life situation.

I need more opportunities to speak English.

If any of my friends here may want to help me improve my English, please contact me.

Instead return, I'll help you with your Japanese.

Starting an English conversation circle

My partner and I have been recently planning to start an English conversation circle for the locals.

This is aour first try, and I'm really excited.

One of the biggest issues is my English speaking skills.

In this context, "skills" is used in the plural.

As a host, I know I have to teach English to our participants, and I'm sure most of them wouldill probably be English-learning beginners.

"Would" isn't gramatically incorrect here, but "will" sounds better.

Since I've worked as a translator for some years, I think my grammar and writing skill iss are not so bad, but I have little experience inwith speaking English in a real-life situation.

I need more opportunities to speak English.

If my friends here may want to help me improve my English, please contact me.

"May" isn't necessary here. "If" already implies a conditional.

Instead return, I'll help you with your Japanese.

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Good job and good luck with your English conversation circle!

Opening English conversation circle


My partner and I have been recently planning to start an English conversation circle for the locals.


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My partner and I have been recently been planning to start an English conversation circle for the locals.

This sounds a bit more natural to me.

My partner and I have been recently been planning to start an English conversation circle for the locals.

My partner and I recently have been recently planning ton starting an English conversation circlegroup for the locals.

また、 Recently, my partner and I have been planning on starting an English conversation group for the locals.

This is a first try and I'm really excited.


This is aour first try, and I'm really excited.

This is a first tryattempt and I'm really excited.

This is aour first try and I'm really excited.

This is aour first tryime doing this and I'm really excited.

This is aour first tryattempt and I'm really excited.

また、 This is our first attempt so I'm really excited.

One of the biggest issues is my English speaking skill.


One of the biggest issues is my English speaking skills.

In this context, "skills" is used in the plural.

One of the biggest issues is my English speaking skills.

One of the biggest issues is my English speaking skills.

One of the biggest issues is my English speaking skillability to speak English.

気にしないで下さい。

As a host, I know I have to teach English to our participants and I'm sure most of them would probably be English-learning beginners.


As a host, I know I have to teach English to our participants, and I'm sure most of them wouldill probably be English-learning beginners.

"Would" isn't gramatically incorrect here, but "will" sounds better.

As a host, I know I have to teach English to our participants and I'm sure most of them wouldill probably be English-learning beginners.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Since I've worked as a translator for some years, I think my grammar and writing skill is not so bad but I have little experience in speaking English in a real-life situation.


Since I've worked as a translator for some years, I think my grammar and writing skill iss are not so bad, but I have little experience inwith speaking English in a real-life situation.

Since I've worked as a translator for some years, I think my grammar and writing skill iss are not so bad but I have little experience in speaking English in a real-life situation.

Since I've worked as a translator for some years, I think my grammar and writing skill iss are not so bad but I have little experience in speaking English in a real-life situation.

Since I've worked as a translator for some years, I think my grammar and writing skill isare not so bad but I have little experience in speaking English in a real-life situation.

Since I've worked as a translator for some years, I think my grammar and writing skill iss are not so bad, but I have little experience in speaking English in a real-life situation.

I need more opportunities to speak English.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If my friends here may want to help me improve my English, please contact me.


If my friends here may want to help me improve my English, please contact me.

"May" isn't necessary here. "If" already implies a conditional.

If any of my friends here may want to help me improve my English, please contact me.

If my friends here may want to help me improve my English, please contact me.

お願いします!私でよかったら、LangCorrectのディスコードのサーバーで連絡して下さい。

If my friends here may want to help me improve my English, please contact me.

Instead, I'll help you with your Japanese.


Instead return, I'll help you with your Japanese.

Instead return, I'll help you with your Japanese.

Instead return, I'll help you with your Japanese.

でも、今、言語交換の相手が三人いますが・・・。

Instead return, I'll help you with your Japanese.

As a host,


I know I have to teach English to our participants and I'm sure most of them would probably be


English-learning beginners.


Since I've worked as a translator for some years, I think my grammar


and writing skill is not so bad but I have little experience in speaking English in a real-life situation.


If my friends here may want to help me improve my English,


please contact me.


Starting English conversation circle


Starting an English conversation circle

Starting an English cConversation circleGroup

凄い! 「サークル」は英語の「group」に当たる言葉です。

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