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alexwong2164

Nov. 12, 2021

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Open a business in Japan is easy II

If you ask the “right” question that means you really understand the problem.

As I said before as foreigner open a business in Japan is easy.

You may want to ask “how easy?”, “What type of business?”…

Let rephrase the statement “open a business in anywhere is easy”.

What question will you ask this time?

So, if you do want to open a business in Japan.

The first question that you should ask is “how much tax you want to pay”.

I don’t mind you don’t agree this concept.

As I preparing my business proposal to open a shop in Japan.

And after I watched 50 failed videos that is the first question I must know how to answer.

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Opening a bBusiness in Japan is eEasy II

In a title, don't forget to capitalise the key words.

If you ask the “right” question that means you really understand the problem.

As I said before, as a foreigner, opening a business in Japan is easy.

You may want to ask “how easy?”, “, “How easy?”, “What type of business?”…”…

Let rephrase the statement “opento: “Opening a business in anywhere is easy”.

What question will you ask this time?

So, if you do want to open a business in Japan., (+next sentence should follow here)

T(following from last phrase) the first question that you should ask is “h, “How much tax do you want to pay”.?”

I don’t mind if you don’t agree with this concept.

I don't mind if..
to agree with something

As I preparinge my business proposal to open a shop in Japan.

or "as I am preparing my.."

And after I have watched 50 failed videosvideos of people that failed, that is the first question I must know how to answer.

I'm not quite sure what you mean with this.
The last three sentences could/should be combined into one sentence.

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Nice to see some talk of business and economics! You don't give much detail about your business though - what area is it in?

Open a business in Japan is easy II


Opening a bBusiness in Japan is eEasy II

In a title, don't forget to capitalise the key words.

If you ask the “right” question that means you really understand the problem.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As I said before as foreigner open a business in Japan is easy.


As I said before, as a foreigner, opening a business in Japan is easy.

You may want to ask “how easy?”, “What type of business?”…


You may want to ask “how easy?”, “, “How easy?”, “What type of business?”…”…

Let rephrase the statement “open a business in anywhere is easy”.


Let rephrase the statement “opento: “Opening a business in anywhere is easy”.

What question will you ask this time?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So, if you do want to open a business in Japan.


So, if you do want to open a business in Japan., (+next sentence should follow here)

The first question that you should ask is “how much tax you want to pay”.


T(following from last phrase) the first question that you should ask is “h, “How much tax do you want to pay”.?”

I don’t mind you don’t agree this concept.


I don’t mind if you don’t agree with this concept.

I don't mind if.. to agree with something

As I preparing my business proposal to open a shop in Japan.


As I preparinge my business proposal to open a shop in Japan.

or "as I am preparing my.."

And after I watched 50 failed videos that is the first question I must know how to answer.


And after I have watched 50 failed videosvideos of people that failed, that is the first question I must know how to answer.

I'm not quite sure what you mean with this. The last three sentences could/should be combined into one sentence.

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