yesterday
Skipping Again
We talked about skipping when we were hanging out the other day.
And then, since we hadn’t done it since elementary school, we decided to give it a try.
Our skipping was super awkward, and we couldn’t stop laughing.
Kids skipping is very cute, but adults skipping isn't cute at all. 🤣
(By "skipping," I mean walking while lightly hopping on alternating feet.)
スキップ再び
先日、私たちが一緒に遊んでいたときに、スキップの話になりました。
そして、小学校以来スキップなんてしていなかったのですが、「やってみよう」という話になって、実際にやってみました。
ものすごい、ぎこちないスキップで、私達は大爆笑でした。
子供のスキップは可愛いけど、大人のスキップは全く可愛くないです。🤣
(スキップとは片足ずつ交互に軽く飛びながら歩く事を書いています。)
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Skipping Again
We talked about skipping when we were hanging out the other day.
And then, since we hadn’t done it since elementary school, we decided to give it a try.
Our skipping was super awkward, and we couldn’t stop laughing.
Kids skipping is very cute, but adults skipping isn't cute at all. 🤣
(By "skipping," I mean walking while lightly hopping on alternating feet.)
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Perfecto! I think your sentences are very natural this time around. For example, the way you translated "そして、小学校以来スキップなんてしていなかったのですが、「やってみよう」という話になって、実際にやってみました。" into natural-sounding English without translating word-for-word is excellent in my opinion. If I had to nitpick about one thing, it would be that "hopping on alternating feet" means that you aren't really walking, so "walking while lightly hopping on alternating feet" is a little contradictory. But I believe everyone can understand what you mean perfectly, so I think it is fine as it is. So, really great job! 🤗
today
ありがとうございます。😀
いつも私は「これで、いいかな？」とか「この表現はおかしいよな、もう少し調べてみよう」などと思いながら、英文を書いています。
少し考えすぎるところもあるように思いますが、やはりちゃんと英文が出来てるかなとか、不安になったりしてしまいます。
少しずつ前に進んでいると思えたので、嬉しかったです。😂
WeNOTE: If readers know who "we" refers to, then the original is fine. (My guess is that many readers do not know who "we" refers to.)
BETTER: My friend and I talked about skipping when we were hanging out the other day.
NOTE: If readers know who "we" refers to, then the original is fine. (My guess is that many readers do not know who "we" refers to.)
BETTER: My friend and I talked about skipping when we were hanging out the other day.
ALSO POSSIBLE: And then, since we hadn’t done it since our elementary school days, we decided to give it a try. ALSO POSSIBLE: And then, since we hadn’t done it since our elementary school days, we decided to give it a try.
Our skipping was super awkward, and we couldn’t stop laughing.
ALSO POSSIBLE: Kids skipping is very cute, but adults skipping isn't cute at all. mong adults this is rarely so.🤣
ALSO POSSIBLE: Kids skipping is very cute, but among adults this is rarely so.🤣
(By "skipping," I meanam referring walking while lightly hopping on alternating feet.)
(By "skipping," I am referring walking while lightly hopping on alternating feet.)
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Skipping: it is probably goo exercise. Perhaps it is a good way to reduce aging?
yesterday
TYPO: X goo exercise O good exercise.
today
Thank you so much.
I think skipping is good for our health because it gets our bodies moving, but adults might feel embarrassed to skip.
I'll recommend doing a skipping rope.
Skipping Again
We talked about skipping whilen we were hanging out the other day.
We talked about skipping while we were hanging out the other day.
And then, since we hadn’t done it since elementary school, we decided to give it a try.
Our skipping was super awkward, and we couldn’t stop laughing.
Kids skipping is very cute, but adults skipping isn't cute at all. 🤣
(By "skipping," I mean walking while lightly hopping on alternating feet.) (By "skipping," I mean walking while lightly hopping on alternating feet.)
As another user has noted, "from foot to foot" might sound a little more natural than "on alternating feet".
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Well written overall!
yesterday
Thank you for checking my writing. 😀
Skipping Again
We talked about skipping when we were hanging out the other day.
And then, since we hadn’t done it since elementary school, we decided to give it a try.
Our skipping was super awkward, and we couldn’t stop laughing.
Kids skipping is very cute, but adults skipping isn't cute at all. 🤣
(By "skipping," I mean walking while lightly hopping on alternating feefrom foot to foot.)
(By "skipping," I mean walking while lightly hopping from foot to foot.)
Your version was grammatically correct, but this phrase is a common one and easier for native speakers to visualise.
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I wonder if part of the awkwardness of adults skipping is a self-consciousness that stops them from moving fluidly haha
yesterday
Thank you for checking my writhg and your message.
Wow!! 😲 I'm happy to learn this new phrase "from foot to foot."
Thanks for teaching me!
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