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AikawaMizore

June 21, 2021

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I slightly sold the hedge against Nikkei index today at more than 1000 yen's whapping drop compared to other daily moves in this year.


Today, I learned ''get'' and ''become'' and the likes using a collocation dictionary. At the back of this dictionary, It is written that you can access for one year to the online subscription dictionary after inputting a code written herein. But it proved that I would be able to use it for 4 year until 2025. This was surprising. Conversely if the valid duration had been shortened, I would have had to be upset.

As I tried this online feature, I have been becoming aware that online is better than actual book I hold. The number of example sentences to each word is mostly more included in the online version. And you can access immediately to the detailed page when you find the word unclear in the meaning or want to search for or confirm the entire meanings and usages for better understanding, by just clicking that word.

The paper version is for eyes not to be tired. And I can see it just before sleeping on the bedding. It is also good for marking something important. And only necessary parts, or more shrunk parts than online can be acquired through it. So it saves time. On top of it, I can feel a sense of accomplishments through a real book, which logs everyday study with notes and marks.

Corrections

I slightly sold the hedge against Nikkei index today at more than 1000 yen's whaopping drop compared to other daily moves in this year.

I'm not sure what you mean by "I slightly sold the hedge"

Today, I learned ''get'' and ''become'' and the likes using a collocation dictionary.

At the back of this dictionary, Iit is written that you can get access for one year to the online subscription dictionary for one year after inputting a code written hereinwithin it.

But it proved that I would be able to use it for 4 year until 2025.

Not sure what you mean by proved here.
Would "it said that I would be able to use it for 4 year until 2025." work?

This was surprising.

Conversely, if the valid duration had been shortened, I would have had to been upset.

As I tried this online feature, I have been becoming aware that online is better than actual book I holdave.

The number ofre are much more example sentences to each word is mostly more included in the online version.

This is more clear

And you can access immediately toaccess the detailed page when you fby just clickindg the word unclear in the meaning or want to search for or confirm the entirwhen you find the the meaning of a word unclear or want to to confirm all the meanings and usages for better understanding, by just clicking that word.

The paper version is for eyes not to be tiredbetter for not tiring your eyes though.

And I can seelook at it just before sleeping on the bedding.

It is also good for marking something important.

And only necessary parts, or more shrunk parts than online can be acquired through it.

I'm not sure what you're trying to say here

So it saves time.

On top of ithat, I can feel a sense of accomplishments through a real book, whichbecause I have logs of every day of study with notes and marks.

Feedback

Good effort. You tried to write some difficult sentences and most of them were almost correct. I think you just need to work on the order/sequencing of your sentences because it seems you have a lot of vocabulary

Online or Offline on a Dictionary


I slightly sold the hedge against Nikkei index today at more than 1000 yen's whapping drop compared to other daily moves in this year.


I slightly sold the hedge against Nikkei index today at more than 1000 yen's whaopping drop compared to other daily moves in this year.

I'm not sure what you mean by "I slightly sold the hedge"

Today, I learned ''get'' and ''become'' and the likes using a collocation dictionary.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At the back of this dictionary, It is written that you can access for one year to the online subscription dictionary after inputting a code written herein.


At the back of this dictionary, Iit is written that you can get access for one year to the online subscription dictionary for one year after inputting a code written hereinwithin it.

But it proved that I would be able to use it for 4 year until 2025.


But it proved that I would be able to use it for 4 year until 2025.

Not sure what you mean by proved here. Would "it said that I would be able to use it for 4 year until 2025." work?

This was surprising.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Conversely if the valid duration had been shortened, I would have had to be upset.


Conversely, if the valid duration had been shortened, I would have had to been upset.

As I tried this online feature, I have been becoming aware that online is better than actual book I hold.


As I tried this online feature, I have been becoming aware that online is better than actual book I holdave.

The number of example sentences to each word is mostly more included in the online version.


The number ofre are much more example sentences to each word is mostly more included in the online version.

This is more clear

And you can access immediately to the detailed page when you find the word unclear in the meaning or want to search for or confirm the entire meanings and usages for better understanding, by just clicking that word.


And you can access immediately toaccess the detailed page when you fby just clickindg the word unclear in the meaning or want to search for or confirm the entirwhen you find the the meaning of a word unclear or want to to confirm all the meanings and usages for better understanding, by just clicking that word.

The paper version is for eyes not to be tired.


The paper version is for eyes not to be tiredbetter for not tiring your eyes though.

And I can see it just before sleeping on the bedding.


And I can seelook at it just before sleeping on the bedding.

It is also good for marking something important.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And only necessary parts, or more shrunk parts than online can be acquired through it.


And only necessary parts, or more shrunk parts than online can be acquired through it.

I'm not sure what you're trying to say here

So it saves time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

On top of it, I can feel sense of accomplishment through a real book, which logs everyday study with notes and marks.


On top of it, I can feel a sense of accomplishments through a real book, which logs everyday study with notes and marks.


On top of ithat, I can feel a sense of accomplishments through a real book, whichbecause I have logs of every day of study with notes and marks.

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