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kazu

June 19, 2020

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Online English conversation

I had a online English conversation today for the first time. I was a little nervous before the class started, but the teacher was pleasant and complimented me on my English, so I really enjoyed it. However, she told me I have a problem with the pronunciation of the "r" and "l", so I'm gonna work to improve the pronunciations. Then, while I talked with her, I felt the fruits of my journal writing. I think I enjoy studying English the most when I can feel my own growth. I'll continue to do my best.

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I had an online English conversation today for the first time.

You use "an" when the next word starts with a vowel sound (a, e, i, o, u). You use "a" when the next word starts with a consonant sound (any letter that is not a vowel).

I was a little nervous before the class started, but the teacher was pleasant and complimented me on my English, so I really enjoyed it.

However, she told me I have a problem with the pronunciation of the "r" and "l", so I'm gonna work to improve themy pronunciations.

I changed "the" into "my" because they are not just pronunciations, but they are how you pronounce these sounds. So they become yours/your possession.

You can also say: "So I'm gonna work on how I pronounce these sounds."

Then, wWhile I talked with her, I felt the fruits of my journal writing.

You can also say: "When I talked to her..."

I think I enjoy studying English the most when I can feel my own growth.

I'll continue to do my best.

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緊張しないでください!kazuさん、英語が上手に書きます。

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kazu

June 24, 2020

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添削ありがとうございます!
juneさんの日本語も上手ですね!

Online English conversation

I had a online English conversation today for the first time.

I was a little nervous before the class started, but the teacher was pleasant and complimented me on my English, so I really enjoyed it.

However, she told me I have a problem with the pronunciation of the "r" and "l", so I'm gonna work ton improveing the way I pronounciatione those sounds.

Then, wWhile I talkeding with her, I felt the fruits of my journal writing.

I think I enjoy studying English the most when I can feel my own growth.

I'll continue to do my best.

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kazu

June 24, 2020

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Thanks!

Online English conversation


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I had a online English conversation today for the first time.


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I had an online English conversation today for the first time.

You use "an" when the next word starts with a vowel sound (a, e, i, o, u). You use "a" when the next word starts with a consonant sound (any letter that is not a vowel).

I was a little nervous before the class started, but the teacher was pleasant and complimented me on my English, so I really enjoyed it.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

However, she told me I have a problem with the pronunciation of the "r" and "l", so I'm gonna work to improve the pronunciations.


However, she told me I have a problem with the pronunciation of the "r" and "l", so I'm gonna work ton improveing the way I pronounciatione those sounds.

However, she told me I have a problem with the pronunciation of the "r" and "l", so I'm gonna work to improve themy pronunciations.

I changed "the" into "my" because they are not just pronunciations, but they are how you pronounce these sounds. So they become yours/your possession. You can also say: "So I'm gonna work on how I pronounce these sounds."

Then, while I talked with her, I felt the fruits of my journal writing.


Then, wWhile I talkeding with her, I felt the fruits of my journal writing.

Then, wWhile I talked with her, I felt the fruits of my journal writing.

You can also say: "When I talked to her..."

I think I enjoy studying English the most when I can feel my own growth.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'll continue to do my best.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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