Jan. 13, 2023
About a month ago, i had a backpain attack again.It happened three times in 2022. I had my mother to give me some typical chinese treatment,such as chinese acupuncture, moxibustion. It did helped to ease the pain and stand up to walk again. But as the attack came too frenquently. My friend convinced me to see a doctor. And i went. The doc suggested that a surgery name PTED(Percutaneous transforaminal endoscopic discectomy) immediately. The operation process is to cut out some of nucleus pulposus which give press to the intervertebral disk and nerves. Once the pression to nevers released and the backpain will be largely reducing. I was shocked at that moment when he said to me. it never crossed my mind that my back is so worst that need a surgery. Finally, i chose the surgery and it was the most hopeless 3 hours i had been in my life. I saw,i heard, i felt through it all. After the surgery, i have to lie on the bed for a month. After a month recovering, i still need to carefully do some excercises for strengthening core muscles. Chances are high to have a recurrence.For now, i am still questioning about myself whether that decision is right or not.
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About a month ago, iI had a back pain attack again. It happened three times in 2022.
About a month ago, I had a back pain attack again. It happened three times in 2022.
I'm sorry to hear this.
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About a month ago, I had an attack of back pain again. It happened three times in 2022.
I had my mother to give me some typical cChinese treatment,s, such as cChinese acupuncture, and moxibustion.
I had my mother give me some typical Chinese treatments, such as Chinese acupuncture and moxibustion.
Lucky you!
We capitalize the first letter of "Chinese" always.
It did helped to ease the pain and to enable me to stand up to walk again.
It did help to ease the pain and to enable me to stand up to walk again.
But as the attack came too frenquently.
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MBut since the attacks have come too frequently, my friend convinced me to see a doctor.
But since the attacks have come too frequently, my friend convinced me to see a doctor.
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But as the attacks have come too frequently, my friend convinced me to see a doctor so I went.
And i went.
The doctor suggested that a surgery namecalled PTED (Percutaneous transforaminal endoscopic discectomy) immediately.
The doctor suggested surgery called PTED (Percutaneous transforaminal endoscopic discectomy) immediately.
The operation processdure is to cut out some of the nucleus pulposus which giveputs press toure on the intervertebral disks and nerves.
The operation procedure is to cut out some of the nucleus pulposus which puts pressure on the intervertebral disks and nerves.
Once the pression toure to the nervers is released and, the back pain will be largely reducingdecrease significantly.
Once the pressure to the nerves is released, the back pain will decrease significantly.
I was shocked at that moment when he said this to me.
I was shocked when he said this to me.
iIt never crossed my mind that my back is so worstbad that I need ato have surgery.
It never crossed my mind that my back is so bad that I need to have surgery.
Finally, i choseI had the surgery and it was the most hopeelpless 3three hours iI had beenve ever had in my life.
Finally, I had the surgery and it was the most helpless three hours I have ever had in my life.
I saw,i heard, iand felt through it alleverything throughout it.
I saw, heard, and felt everything throughout it.
After the surgery, iI haved to lie on thein bed for a month.
After the surgery, I had to lie in bed for a month.
After a month of recovering, iI still need to carefully do some excercises forto strengthening my core muscles.
After a month of recovering, I still need to carefully do some exercises to strengthen my core muscles.
Chances are high to havefor a recurrence. For now, iI am still questioning about myself about whether or not that decision iwas right or not.
Chances are high for a recurrence. For now, I am still questioning myself about whether or not that decision was right.
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I hope you feel better soon. Good work!
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The minimally invasive surgery
About a month ago, i had a backpain attack agnother attack of back pain. It happened three times in 2022.
About a month ago i had another attack of back pain. It happened three times in 2022.
I had my mother to give me some typical chinese treatment,s such as chinese acupuncture, and moxibustion.
I had my mother give me some typical chinese treatments such as chinese acupuncture and moxibustion.
It did helped to ease the pain and allow me to stand up toand walk again.
It did help to ease the pain and allow me to stand up and walk again.
But as the attacks came too frenquently.
But the attacks came too frequently.
My friend convinced me to see a doctor.
The doc suggested that a surgery namecalled PTED (Percutaneous transforaminal endoscopic discectomy) should be done immediately.
The doc suggested surgery called PTED (Percutaneous transforaminal endoscopic discectomy) should be done immediately.
The operation process is to cutinvolves cutting out some of the nucleus pulposus which give press topresses on the intervertebral disk and nerves.
The operation involves cutting out some of the nucleus pulposus which presses on the intervertebral disk and nerves.
Once the pression to neverure is released and the backpain will be largely reducinged.
Once the pressure is released the backpain will be largely reduced.
I was shocked at that moment when he said to mewhen he told me this.
I was shocked when he told me this.
it never crossed my mind that my back iwas so worstbad that need a surgery was needed.
it never crossed my mind that my back was so bad that surgery was needed.
Finally, i chose the surgery and it was the most hopeless 3 hours i had beenve had in my life.
Finally, i chose the surgery and it was the most hopeless 3 hours i have had in my life.
I saw,i heard, i felt through it all.
After the surgery, i haved to lie on thein bed for a month.
After the surgery, i had to lie in bed for a month.
After a month recovering, i still need to carefully do some excercises forto strengthening core muscles.
After a month recovering, i still need to carefully do some excercises to strengthen core muscles.
Chances are high to haveThe chance of a recurrence. is high. For now, i am still questioning about myselfwondering whether thate decision ito have surgery was right or not.
The chance of a recurrence is high. For now, i am still wondering whether the decision to have surgery was right or not.
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You managed to very clearly get the meaning across. Hope your back is getting better!
tThe minimally invasive surgery
The minimally invasive surgery
About a month ago, iI had a back pain attack again. It happened three times in 2022.
About a month ago, I had a back pain attack again. It happened three times in 2022.
I had my mother to give me some typical cChinese treatment, such as cChinese acupuncture, and moxibustion.
I had my mother give me some typical Chinese treatment, such as Chinese acupuncture and moxibustion.
It did helped to ease the pain and let me stand up toand walk again.
It did help to ease the pain and let me stand up and walk again.
Or "It helped".
But as the attacks came too frenquently.,
But as the attacks came too frequently,
Mmy friend convinced me to see a doctor.
my friend convinced me to see a doctor.
This sentence should be combined with the preceding sentence to make one sentence. First the motivation, then the action.
And iSo I went.
So I went.
The doc suggested that a surgery name PTED (Percutaneous transforaminal endoscopic discectomy) immediately.
The doc suggested a surgery name PTED (Percutaneous transforaminal endoscopic discectomy) immediately.
The operation process is to cut out some of nucleus pulposus which giveputs press toure on the intervertebral disk and nerves.
The operation process is to cut out some of nucleus pulposus which puts pressure on the intervertebral disk and nerves.
Once the pressiure on tohe nervers is released and, the back pain will be largely reducinged.
Once the pressure on the nerves is released, the back pain will be largely reduced.
I was shocked at that moment when he said to me.
I was shocked when he said to me.
itIt had never crossed my mind that my back iwas so worstbad that I would need a surgery.
It had never crossed my mind that my back was so bad that I would need surgery.
Finally, iI chose the surgery and it was the most hopeelpless 3 hours iI had beenexperienced in my life.
Finally, I chose the surgery and it was the most helpless 3 hours I had experienced in my life.
I think you might mean helpless here, like you can't move or do anything to help yourself out of a bad situation.
I saw,i heard, iand felt everything through it all.
I saw, heard, and felt everything through it all.
After the surgery, iI haved to lie on thein bed for a month.
After the surgery, I had to lie in bed for a month.
After a month recovering, iI still need to carefully do some excercises forto strengthening my core muscles.
After a month recovering, I still need to carefully do some exercises to strengthen my core muscles.
Chances are high to have ahat the back pain will reoccurrence. For now, iI am still questioning about myself about whether that decision iwas right or not.
Chances are high that the back pain will reoccur. For now, I am still questioning myself about whether that decision was right or not.
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I'm sorry this happened to you, but I hope you recover quickly and your pain stays away!
Don't forget to always capitalise "I" and leave spaces after punctuation marks. Nicely written story!
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About a month ago, iI had a back pain attack again. It happened three times in 2022.
About a month ago, I had a back pain attack again. It happened three times in 2022.
Insert a blank space after the period.
I had my mother to give me some typical cChinese treatment, such as cChinese acupuncture, and moxibustion.
I had my mother give me some typical Chinese treatment, such as Chinese acupuncture and moxibustion.
Insert a blank space after the comma.
It did helped to ease the pain and enabled me to stand up to walk again.
It did help to ease the pain and enabled me to stand up to walk again.
But as the attacks came too frenquently., my friend…
But as the attacks came too frequently, my friend…
Merge this incomplete sentence with the next.
M…my friend convinced me to see a doctor.
…my friend convinced me to see a doctor.
And iI went.
And I went.
The doc suggested that a surgery named PTED (Percutaneous transforaminal endoscopic discectomy) immediately.
The doc suggested a surgery named PTED (Percutaneous transforaminal endoscopic discectomy) immediately.
Insert a blank space before the left parenthesis mark.
The operation process is to cut out some of nucleus pulposus which give press topresses on the intervertebral diskc and nerves.
The operation process is to cut out some nucleus pulposus which presses on the intervertebral disc and nerves.
Once the pressiure on tohe nervers is released and the back pain will be largely reducinged.
Once the pressure on the nerves is released the back pain will be largely reduced.
I was shocked at thate moment when he said this to me.
I was shocked at the moment when he said this to me.
itIt had never crossed my mind that my back iwas so worstbad that it need aed surgery.
It had never crossed my mind that my back was so bad that it needed surgery.
Finally, iI chose the surgery and it was the most hopeless 3 hours i had been inof my life.
Finally, I chose the surgery and it was the most hopeless 3 hours of my life.
I saw,i I heard, i and I felt through it all.
I saw, I heard and I felt through it all.
After the surgery, iI have to lie [on the bed | in bed] for a month.
After the surgery, I have to lie [on the bed | in bed] for a month.
“I have” means this month is not complete—you are still lying in your back.
After a month recovering, iI still need to carefully do some excercises for strengthening core muscles.
After a month recovering, I still need to carefully do some exercises for strengthening core muscles.
Chances are high to have a recurrence. For now, iI am still questioning about myself whether that decision iwas right or not.
Chances are high to have a recurrence. For now, I am still questioning whether that decision was right or not.
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Have you heard of the Mackenzie Method of treating back pain? It was developed by a Dr. Mackenzie about 50 years ago and is very successful, used by doctors all over the world. My parents use it and I do, too. It’s very effective for us. It involves some simple stretches and changing your posture, especially the way you hold your back when you sit. Even though my dad had back surgery a long time before he heard of this method, it is still helpful to him (my mom and I haven’t needed back surgery).
https://mckenziemethod.com/
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About a month ago, i had a backpain attack again.It happened three times in 2022.
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About a month ago
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I had my mother to give me some typical chinese treatment,such as chinese acupuncture, moxibustion.
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It did helped to ease the pain and stand up to walk again.
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My friend convinced me to see a doctor.
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The doc suggested that a surgery name PTED(Percutaneous transforaminal endoscopic discectomy) immediately.
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The operation process is to cut out some of nucleus pulposus which give press to the intervertebral disk and nerves.
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Once the pression to nevers released and the backpain will be largely reducing.
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I was shocked at that moment when he said to me.
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it never crossed my mind that my back is so worst that need a surgery.
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Finally, i chose the surgery and it was the most hopeless 3 hours i had been in my life.
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Finally, I think you might mean helpless here, like you can't move or do anything to help yourself out of a bad situation.
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I saw,i heard, i felt through it all.
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After the surgery, i have to lie on the bed for a month.
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After a month recovering, i still need to carefully do some excercises for strengthening core muscles.
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Chances are high to have a recurrence.For now, i am still questioning about myself whether that decision is right or not.
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