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one's view on love

I talk about love in this week and next week.
This word "love" has a lot of meaning.
I'm not a relationship right now.
I'm currently single.
so lately, I've wanting to think more about my views on love and relationships to understand them more clearly.
This week I'll write more detail and result of thinking about love.
This story consist of 3 steps.
1st, my view on love
2st, love view in Japan
3st, About future relationships
maybe tomorrow will start.
Big content

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one's view on love

I would like to talk about love in this week and next weeks.

Thise word "love" has a lot of meaning.

I'm not in a relationship right now.

sSo lately, I've been wanting to think more about my views on love and relationships to understand them more clearly.

This week I'll write more detail and result of thinking about love.

1st, my view on love
2
stnd, love view in Japan
3
strd, About future relationships
maybe
tomorrowe will start tomorrow.

one's view on love

I talk about love in this week and next week.

This word "love" has a lot of meaning.

I'm not a relationship right now.

I'm currently single.

so lately, I've wanting ed to think more about my views on love and relationships to understand them more clearly.

just changed the “ing” ending on wanting to help make more sense but still good job!!

This week I'll write more detail and result of thinking about love.

This story consist of 3 steps.

1st, my view on love
2
stnd, love view in Japan
3
strd, About future relationships
maybe tomorrow will start.

its so confusing but when talking about steps its 1st, 2nd and 3rd. its a common mistake even i still make it haha

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well done!!!! the only mistakes u made were very small and even if they werent fixed its still easy to follow and understand

one's view on love

I will be talking about love in this week and next week.

talk is simple present tense so it wouldn’t work for talking about later this week or next week as they are in the future

This word "love" has a lot of meaning.

speech marks are only used when quoting from something that has been said

I'm not in a relationship right now.

I'm currently single.

soSo as of lately, I've been wanting to think more about my views on love and relationships to understand them more clearly.

This week I'll write will be writing in more detail and resultoutcomes of thinking about love.

writing as it is future
outcome sounds more clear than results

This story consists of 3 steps.

1st, my view on love
2st,
love viewmy view of love in Japan
3st, About future relationships

maybe tomorrow
i will start.

Big content

Feedback

really good just missing a few grammar bits

oOne's view on love

"One's" is completely correct, but sounds very formal. It sounds almost old fashioned. You could say "My" instead. Again, not wrong, depends on what you want to say.

I talk about love in this week and next week.

Thise word "love" has a lot of meaning.

I'm not a relationship right now.

I'm currently single.

so lLately, I've wanting ed to think more about my views on love and relationships to understand them more clearly.

"Wanting" is the the wrong tense here - it sounds like the literal present, but you want to speak more generally than that. Use "wanted" instead.

This week I'll write more detail as and result of thinking about love.

This story consist of 3 stepparts.

"Steps" sounds like a set of instructions.

1st, my view on love
2
st, love viewnd, my view on love in Japan
3
strd, Aabout future relationships
maybe tomorrow
I will start.

Feedback

I'm not sure what you mean by 'Big content'? Do you mean 'Heavy topic?' or 'Serious topic'?

Overall this is very good, excellent work!

so lately, I've wanting to think more about my views on love and relationships to understand them more clearly.


so lLately, I've wanting ed to think more about my views on love and relationships to understand them more clearly.

"Wanting" is the the wrong tense here - it sounds like the literal present, but you want to speak more generally than that. Use "wanted" instead.

soSo as of lately, I've been wanting to think more about my views on love and relationships to understand them more clearly.

so lately, I've wanting ed to think more about my views on love and relationships to understand them more clearly.

just changed the “ing” ending on wanting to help make more sense but still good job!!

sSo lately, I've been wanting to think more about my views on love and relationships to understand them more clearly.

This week I'll write more detail and result of thinking about love.


This week I'll write more detail as and result of thinking about love.

This week I'll write will be writing in more detail and resultoutcomes of thinking about love.

writing as it is future outcome sounds more clear than results

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This week I'll write more detail and result of thinking about love.

one's view on love


oOne's view on love

"One's" is completely correct, but sounds very formal. It sounds almost old fashioned. You could say "My" instead. Again, not wrong, depends on what you want to say.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

one's view on love

I talk about love in this week and next week.


I talk about love in this week and next week.

I will be talking about love in this week and next week.

talk is simple present tense so it wouldn’t work for talking about later this week or next week as they are in the future

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I would like to talk about love in this week and next weeks.

This word "love" has a lot of meaning.


Thise word "love" has a lot of meaning.

This word "love" has a lot of meaning.

speech marks are only used when quoting from something that has been said

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Thise word "love" has a lot of meaning.

I'm not a relationship right now.


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I'm not in a relationship right now.

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I'm not in a relationship right now.

I'm currently single.


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This story consist of 3 steps.


This story consist of 3 stepparts.

"Steps" sounds like a set of instructions.

This story consists of 3 steps.

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1st, my view on love 2st, love view in Japan 3st, About future relationships maybe tomorrow will start.


1st, my view on love
2
st, love viewnd, my view on love in Japan
3
strd, Aabout future relationships
maybe tomorrow
I will start.

1st, my view on love
2st,
love viewmy view of love in Japan
3st, About future relationships

maybe tomorrow
i will start.

1st, my view on love
2
stnd, love view in Japan
3
strd, About future relationships
maybe tomorrow will start.

its so confusing but when talking about steps its 1st, 2nd and 3rd. its a common mistake even i still make it haha

1st, my view on love
2
stnd, love view in Japan
3
strd, About future relationships
maybe
tomorrowe will start tomorrow.

Big content


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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