March 27, 2021
One Point About HelloTalk
One thought about HelloTalk.
Overall, I think this app is very useful, especially because it has strong interactivity. People post articles, thoughts, views, recordings, and pictures, then you can leave comments on it, including texts and audio. You can also read, listen, and write on those posts, which are really useful to improve one's English skills. I am very happy to correct foreigners' Chinese essays on HelloTalk, but every time some Chinese people always correct it, and there is more than one person. I often write some English journals on HelloTalk, but it seems there are rarely people to correct them. The corrected journals count approximately 30 to 40 percent. I don't know why, but I really want my journals to all be corrected by native English speakers as soon as possible after I post them.
One Point About HelloTalk
One thought about HelloTalk.
Overall, I think this app is very useful, especially because it has strongpromotes interactivityon.
"interactivity" is more related to people interacting with technology, while "interaction" can be used for people interacting with other people
People post articles, thoughts, views, recordings, and pictures, and then you can leave comments on it, including texts and audio.
Switching subjects/connecting two independent clauses, so you want a conjunction
You can also read, listen, and write on those posts, which are really useful to improve one's English skills.
I am very happy to correct foreigners' Chinese essays on HelloTalk, but every time someI do, some other Chinese people always correct it too, and there is always more than one person.
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I often write some English journals on HelloTalk, but it seems there are rarely people to correct them.
The corrected journals count approximately 30 to 40 percentApproximately 30 to 40 percent of my journals are corrected.
This is more natural/common to say
I don't know why, but I really want my journals to all be corrected by native English speakers as soon as possible after I post them.
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March 27, 2021
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Overall, I think this app is very useful, especially because it has strong interactivity. Overall, I think this app is very useful, especially because it "interactivity" is more related to people interacting with technology, while "interaction" can be used for people interacting with other people |
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People post articles, thoughts, views, recordings, and pictures, then you can leave comments on it, including texts and audio. People post articles, thoughts, views, recordings, and pictures, and then you can leave comments on it, including texts and audio. Switching subjects/connecting two independent clauses, so you want a conjunction |
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You can also read, listen, and write on those posts, which are really useful to improve one's English skills. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am very happy to correct foreigners' Chinese essays on HelloTalk, but every time some Chinese people always correct it, and there is more than one person. I am very happy to correct foreigners' Chinese essays on HelloTalk, but every time Edits for clarity |
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I often write some English journals on HelloTalk, but it seems there are rarely people to correct them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The corrected journals count approximately 30 to 40 percent.
This is more natural/common to say |
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I don't know why, but I really want my journals to all be corrected by native English speakers as soon as possible after I post them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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