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yaw

Feb. 9, 2023

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I need a person for accompany me to go swimming pool, I have an activity from swimming, but in the practice I am always alone because I don't friend in that place, so I don't like to go alone and my friends everyone are busy. I want a person that I can company me, help me please I hate alone

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I need (a person for/someone) to accompany me to go to the swimming pool,. I have an activity from swimming, but in theduring practice I am always alone because I don't friend in that place, sohave any friends there. I don't like to go alone and, but my friends and everyone are busy.

I want a person that I can accompany me, h. Help me please, I being hate alone.

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I'm sorry, I hope you find someone to go with :(

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I need a person forto accompany me to go to the swimming pool,. I have an activity from swimmingswim, but in the practice I am always alone because I don't friend in that plachave a friend there, so I don't like to gogoing alone andbut my friends everyonare arell busy.

Again, try to use more sentences.

I want a person that Iwho can company me, h. Help me, please. I hate being alone.

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Good work! I hope you find someone soon.

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I need a person for accompany me twhen I go gto the swimming pool,. I have an activity from swimming activity, but in the practice I am always alone because I don't friend in that place, sohave any friends there. I don't like to go alone andbut my friends everyone areare always busy.

I want a person that I can o accompany me, help me please, I hate being alone.

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I hope you can find or make some friends to go swimming with! Most of the corrections I made were to make your writing flow smoother and sound more natural.

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yaw

Feb. 9, 2023

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Thanks for you help!!!!!

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oOne pPerson

oOne pPerson

I need a person for accompany me to go swimming pool, I have an activity from swimming, but in the practice I am always alone because I don't friend in that place, so I don't like to go alone and my friends everyone are busy.

I need a person for accompany me twhen I go gto the swimming pool,. I have an activity from swimming activity, but in the practice I am always alone because I don't friend in that place, sohave any friends there. I don't like to go alone andbut my friends everyone areare always busy.

I need a person forto accompany me to go to the swimming pool,. I have an activity from swimmingswim, but in the practice I am always alone because I don't friend in that plachave a friend there, so I don't like to gogoing alone andbut my friends everyonare arell busy.

Again, try to use more sentences.

I need (a person for/someone) to accompany me to go to the swimming pool,. I have an activity from swimming, but in theduring practice I am always alone because I don't friend in that place, sohave any friends there. I don't like to go alone and, but my friends and everyone are busy.

I want a person that I can company me, help me please I hate alone

I want a person that I can o accompany me, help me please, I hate being alone.

I want a person that Iwho can company me, h. Help me, please. I hate being alone.

I want a person that I can accompany me, h. Help me please, I being hate alone.

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