Dec. 16, 2020
One of my hobbies----writing
This is something I actually don't talk to anybody about but I’m really addicted in writing some articles in English. And I shared it in a corrective website to correct my mistakes. What’s more. It taught me how to communicate, how to craft a narrative effectively, and also how to be interesting. The best thing about writing is that it actually has improved my verbal communication skills.
I haven’t written for a long time after the graduation from the senior high school. What’s more, my writing skill has been limited to a rigid format. In China, we were allowed to recited many advanced, beautiful sentences for the exams, not practical, helpful ones. In my views, the first step of writing is express what I thought with my own words and receive more corrections from others to improve them. Practice makes perfect, the things I learnt not like a strangers I greeted but more like a close friend. It could be a part of mine; it could be my weapon to took; it even could be my life. I do hope I will never forget the period of time on writing and stick in it.
This is something I actually don't talk to anybody about but I’m really addicted into writing some articles in English.
And I shared it them in a corrective website to correct my mistakes.
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Iit taught me how to communicate, how to craft a narrative effectively, and also how to be interesting.
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It could be a part of mine; it could be my weapon to took; it even could be my life.
I'm not sure exactly what you're saying, try saying it differently.
I do hope I will never forget the period of time on writing anddon't forget to write for a while, but instead that I stick into it.
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Great work! Keep it up. I like your efforts to use more complex sentences.
Dec. 17, 2020
thank you! I will correct my mistakes! QvQ
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One of my hobbies----writing |
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This is something I actually don't talk to anybody about but I’m really addicted in writing some articles in English. This is something I actually don't talk to anybody about but I’m really addicted |
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And I shared it in a corrective website to correct my mistakes.
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What’s more. What’s more |
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It taught me how to communicate, how to craft a narrative effectively, and also how to be interesting.
Same sentence as "What's more" |
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The best thing about writing is that it actually has improved my verbal communication skills. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I haven’t written for a long time after the graduation from the senior high school. I haven’t written for a long time |
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What’s more, my writing skill has been limited to a rigid format.
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In China, we were allowed to recited many advanced, beautiful sentences for the exams, not practical, helpful ones. In China, we were allowed to wr Recite means to say out loud |
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In my views, the first step of writing is express what I thought with my own words and receive more corrections from others to improve them. In my view |
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Practice makes perfect, the things I learnt not like a strangers I greeted but more like a close friend. Practice makes perfect Try rephrasing this and the next sentence, I'm not exactly sure what you mean. |
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It could be a part of mine; it could be my weapon to took; it even could be my life. It could be a part of mine; it could be my weapon to took; it even could be my life. I'm not sure exactly what you're saying, try saying it differently. |
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I do hope I will never forget the period of time on writing and stick in it. I do hope I |
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