Aug. 7, 2024
One of My Favorite Channels
It's extremely hot these days. I don't want to eat, but I have to, so I watched several videos at dinner time to distract myself from reality and work up an appetite.
One of My Favorite Channels is 滇西小哥 Dianxi Xiaoge. Her account is @dianxixiaoge on YouTube. She has an account on Bilibili too, which I normally use.
I like her channel for many reasons.
The first one is the dishes she made, of course. All of them are the perfect combinations of color, aroma, and taste. Even just watching her cook can make your mouth water.
The second reason is the atmosphere in her family. Everyone loves and helps each other -- This makes me a bit envious, especially her grandma who reminds me of my great grandma.
The scenery is the third reason why I love those videos. Yunnan is her hometown, so most videos were taken in Yunnan Province. I've been there four times and traveled to six cities in Yunnan. They are so gorgeous that I want to explore more.
I highly recommend this channel to you! You might learn how to cook Chinese dishes from her.
这几天非常热。不想饭，但又不得不吃，所以我会看视频来让自己远离现实，开开胃。
我最喜欢的频道之一是滇西小哥。她的YouTube账号是@dianxixiaoge。她在哔哩哔哩上也有个账号，我平时看这个。
我喜欢她的频道有很多原因。
首先当然是她做的菜。它们都色香味俱全。即使只是看着她做饭也会让你流口水。
第二个原因是她的家庭氛围。每个人都爱彼此，互相帮助——这让我有点羡慕，尤其是她的奶奶，她让我想起了我的曾祖母。
风景是我喜欢这些视频的第三个原因。她家在云南，所以大部分视频都是在云南拍的。我去过云南四次，游玩过六个城市。它们太美了，我想探索更多。
强烈推荐这个频道！你可能可以向她学做中国菜。
One of My Favorite Channels
It's extremely hot these days.
I don't want to eat, but I have to, so I watched several videos at dinner time to distract myself from reality and work up an appetite.
One of My Favorite Channels is 滇西小哥 Dianxi Xiaoge.
Her account is @dianxixiaoge on YouTube.
She has an account on Bilibili too, which is the one I normally usewatch.
I like her channel for many reasons.
The first one is the dishes she madekes, of course.
All of them are the perfect combinations of color, aroma, and taste.
Even just watching her cook can make your mouth water.
The second reason is the atmosphere in her family.
Everyone loves and helps each other -- This makes me a bit envious, especially because her grandma who reminds me of my great grandma.
The scenery is the third reason why I love those videos.
Yunnan is her hometown, so most videos were taken in Yunnan Province.
I've been there four times and have traveled to six cities in Yunnan.
They are so gorgeous that I want to explore more.
I highly recommend this channel to you!
You might learn how to cook Chinese dishes from her.
Aug. 8, 2024
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
One of My Favorite Channels
It's extremely hot these days.
I don't want to eat, but I have to, so I watched several videos at dinner time to distract myself from reality and work up an appetite.
One of My Favorite Channels is 滇西小哥 Dianxi Xiaoge.
Her account is @dianxixiaoge on YouTube.
She has an account on Bilibili too, which I normally use.
I like her channel for many reasons.
The first one is the dishes she madekes, of course.
All of them are the perfect combinations of color, aroma, and taste.
Removing the 's' makes it sound more natural, but both grammatically correct.
Even just watching her cook can make your mouth water.
The second reason is the atmosphere in her family.
Everyone loves and helps each other -- This makes me a bit envious, especially her grandma who reminds me of my great grandma.
The scenery is the third reason why I love those videos.
Yunnan is her hometown, so most videos were taken in Yunnan Province.
I've been there four times and traveled to six cities in Yunnan.
They are so gorgeous that I want to explore more.
You might learn how to cook Chinese dishes from her.
Feedback
Great job, maybe you should try to write longer sentences and link your thoughts through linking words. But great overall!! :)
Aug. 7, 2024
Thank you so much! I'll try to do that next time.
One of My Favorite ChannelsSUGGESTION: Specify what kind of channel. A television channel? A YouTube channel? A WeChat channel? （如今有很多不同类型的渠道。）
It's extremely hot these days. / ALSO POSSIBLE: It has been extremely hot these days. /
I don't want to eat, but I have to, soALSO POSSIBLE: I have no appetite, but should. I watched several videos at dinner time to distract myself from reality and work up an appetite.
One of My Favorite YouTube Channels is 滇西小哥 Dianxi Xiaoge.
Her account is @dianxixiaoge on YouTube.
She has an account on Bilibili too, which I normally use.
I like her channel for many reasons.
All of them are thr videos are perfect combinations of color, aroma, and taste.
ALSO POSSIBLE: / Even just watching her cooking can make your mouth water.
The second reason isMoreover, I like the atmosphere in her family.
Everyone loves and helps each other -- This makes me a bit envious, especially her grandma who reminds me of my great grandma.
The scenery is the third reason why I love thoseher videos.
Yunnan is her hometown, so most videos were taken in Yunnan Province.
I've been there four times and traveled to six cities in Yunnan.
I highly recommend this channel to you!
You might learn how to cook Chinese dishes from her.
Feedback
问：她的口音很像标准中文吗？
Aug. 7, 2024
谢谢您的修改和建议！
我听着她普通话挺标准的，不过她有时候会跟家里人讲云南方言。
The first one is the dishes she made, of courser cooking.
The second reason is the atmosphere in her family.
The second reason is her family's closeness.
Aug. 7, 2024
Thanks for your corrections and feedback!
Have a nice day!
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