May 31, 2024
I'm going to have a one-day travel to Suzhou City tomorrow.
My train ticket is around 9:30 and the train station is not far from my apartment, so I'll sleep in tomorrow morning and head out around 8:20. Then I can have around 40 minutes to check in at the station -- it's long enough even if the station is busy.
The distance from Shanghai to Suzhou is around 85 km, so I will reach Suzhou Station in 25 minutes.
The return ticket is at 19:50, but I need to spend 45 minutes to get to the train station, which means I need to finish everything before 18:30.
Have a nice weekend!
我明天要去苏州一日游。
火车票在9:30左右,火车站离我家不远,所以明早我要睡个懒觉,8:20左右出发。然后有大约40分钟在车站办理进站手续——即使车站很忙,时间也够了。
从上海到苏州大约是85公里,所以我将在25分钟内到达苏州站。
回程的票是19:50,但我要花45分钟才能到火车站,这意味着我需要在18:30之前完成所有的事情。
祝大家周末愉快!
One-day Trip
I'm going to haveon a one-day travelip to Suzhou City tomorrow.
Better to say trip instead of travel here. If you were to use travel as a noun, it would usually be "travels" (for example, "During my travels around the world, I have learnt many things.") But generally, "trip" would be the safer option.
"Going on" would also be a better way to phrase this (as in "going on holidays")
My train ticket is for around 9:30 and the train station is not far from my apartment, so I'll sleep in tomorrow morning and head out around 8:20.
Then I can have around 40 minutes to check in at the station -- it's long enough even if the station is busy.
The distance from Shanghai to Suzhou is around 85 km, so I will reach Suzhou Station in 25 minutes.
The return ticket is at 19:50, but I need to spend 45 minutes to get to the train station, which means I need to finish everything before 18:30.
The "to spend" just sounded a little weird and unnecessary to me.
Have a nice weekend!
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Good job! Since this is a little late (I'm trying catch up with all these entries again in my free time, since I had to stop when I realised I was prioritising this over school - not a good idea by the way), I'm assuming you've already gone on this trip. So how was it? I hope you had a nice time!
I'm going to havtake a one-day travelip to Suzhou (City) tomorrow.
“Travel” isn’t very often used as a countable noun, and “have a travel” sounds unnatural to my American ears.
“Day trip” is an excellent suggestion:
- I’m taking a day trip to Suzhou tomorrow.
- I’m going on a day trip to Suzhou tomorrow.
I don’t think it’s necessary to add “City” after Suzhou.
My train ticket is around {9:30 a.m. | 09:30} and the train station is not far from my apartment, so I'll sleep in tomorrow morning and head out around 8:20.
Your original is also OK, since the reader doesn’t have to think very hard to realize that, for a day trip, you’d be leaving at 9:30 in the morning, not at night.
Then I can have around 40 minutes to check in at the station -- it's long enough even if the station is busy.
The distance from Shanghai to Suzhou is around 85 km, so I will reach Suzhou Station in 25 minutes.
The return ticket is at 19:50, but I need to spend 45 minutes to get to the train station, which means I need to finish everything before 18:30.
Have a nice weekend!
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I’ve been to Shanghai twice, but never to Suzhou. I hope you have a nice time.
A One-dDay Trip
NOTE: In some styles, you could also write "A one-day trip." [Different styles of capitalization exist in English.]
I'm going to have/take a one-day travel to Suzhou City tomorrow.
My train ticket iis/leaves around 9:30 and the train station is not far from my apartment, so I'll sleep in tomorrow morning and head out around 8:20.
Then I can have around 40 minutes to check in at the station -- it's long enough even if the station is busy.
The return ticket is at 19:50, but I need to spend 45 minutes to get to the train station, which means I need to finish everything before 18:30.
Have a nice weekend!
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Hope you had a nice trip to Suzhou!
One-dDay Trip
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Have a nice weekend!
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Have fun! :)
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Have a nice weekend!
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Have a nice trip!
One-day Trip
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Have a nice weekend!
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Overall these sentences work originally, but the corrections are more for native sounding speech :) good job!
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