Sept. 27, 2024
This morning I woke up at 5 am, I didn’t have to do it, but I wanted to make some breakfast for my girlfriend before she left for her job, she didn’t have much time to do it. I cooked some eggs, a piece of bread, and a cup of coffee, it was delicious. At 7 am, I started to work, I completed some tasks pending, and I joined in a call for 1 hour. I was very busy between 9 am and 12 pm, I had a ton of emails to read in my inbox. At 12:30 I went out for lunch, and then, I went to the laundry. At 2 pm I returned to my work to continue with my tasks. At 5 pm I finished work and I and my girlfriend went to a mall, I was looking for a haircut but unfortunately, my favorite hairdresser wasn’t in the hair salon. As we were in the mall, we decided to have a coffee and biscuit and talk about our day. After that, we returned home, on the way, we bought some strawberries and grapes, we love to eat fruits. When we were at home, I cooked some steak and vegetables for dinner. At 8:00 pm, I took my English classes, which took around 2 hours. In the meantime, my girlfriend was cooking the lunch for the next day. Finally, we went to sleep, we were really tired.
One day in my life
This morning I woke up at 5 am,. I didn’t have to do it, but I wanted to make some breakfast for my girlfriend before she left for her job, because she didn’t have much time to do it herself.
I cooked some eggs, a piece of bread, and a cup of coffee, it was delicious.
At 7 am, I started to work,. I completed some tasks pending tasks, and I joined in a call for 1 hour.
I was very busy between 9 am and 12 pm,. I had a ton of emails to read in my inbox.
At 12:30 I went out for lunch, and then, I went to the laundryomat.
At 2 pm I returned to my work to continue with my tasks.
At 5 pm I finished work and I and my girlfriend and I went to a mall,. I was looking for a haircut but unfortunately, my favorite hairdresser wasn’t in the hair salon.
As we were in the mall, we decided to have a coffee and biscuit and talk about our day.
After that, we returned home, o. On the way, we bought some strawberries and grapes, because we love to eat fruits.
When we weregot at home, I cooked some steak and vegetables for dinner.
At 8:00 pm, I took my English classes, which took around 2 hours.
In the meantime, my girlfriend was coomaking the lunch for the next day.
"Cooking" is okay too, but people use "making" more often.
Finally, we went to sleep,; we were really tired.
Feedback
Great! Just be careful of comma splices. Two independent clauses can't be joined by a comma. You can use a semicolon or make them into two separate sentences.
This morning I woke up at 5 am,. Even though I didn’t have to do it, but, I wanted to make some breakfast for my girlfriend before she left for her job, as she didn’t have much time to do itmake it herself.
I cooked some eggs, a piece of bread, and a cup of coffee, i. It was delicious.!
At 7 am, I started to work,. I completed some tasks I had pending, and then I joined in a call for 1 hour.
"started to work" sounds like you began some task, which may or may not be related to your job. Whereas "started work" sounds like you began your job specifically.
I was very busy between 9 am and 12 pm, as I had a ton of emails to read in my inbox.
At 12:30 I went out for lunch, and then, I went to thedo laundry.
At 2 pm I returned to my work toand continued with my tasks.
Sounds a bit more natural
At 5 pm I finished work and I and, so my girlfriend and I went to athe mall,. I was looking for a haircut, but unfortunately, my favorite hairdresser wasn’t in the hair salon.
Whenever you list yourself with other people (either using me or I), you should always put yourself last - though this is a common grammar mistake even for native speakers.
As we were in the mall, we decided to have a coffee and biscuits and talk about our day.
After that, we returned home, and on the way, we bought some strawberries and grapes, - we love to eat fruits.
When we were agot home, I cooked some steak and vegetables for dinner.
At 8:00 pm, I tookhad my English classes, which took around 2 hours.
This is fine if your had classes at a scheduled time (like at a school). If you're studying on your own, it maybe a bit more natural to say "I studied English for about 2 hours" instead.
In the meanDuring that time, my girlfriend was cooking theed (prepared) lunch for the next day.
In this case, "meantime" doesn't quite sound right to me. I think it's because usually when we say "meantime" the two tasks are directly related in some way, but I'm not 100% sure.
Finally, we went to sleep, - we were really tired.
Feedback
Sounds like you and your girlfriend had a great day!
Main piece of feedback from me is that your sentences run on a bit - this can make them tricky to read. Try separating them a bit more. There's no one right way to do this so feel free to try different ways of doing this.
Otherwise everything else was pretty good!
OneA day in my life
This morning I woke up at 5 am, I didn’t have to do it, but I wanted to make some breakfast for my girlfriend before she left for her job, otherwise she diwouldn’'t have much time to do it.
I cooked some eggs, a piece of bread, and a cup of coffee, i. It was delicious.
At 7 am, I started to work, I completed some tasks pending tasks, and I joined in a call for 1 hour.
I was very busy between 9 am and 12 pm, I had a ton of emails to read in my inbox.
At 12:30 I went out for lunch, and then, I went to the laundry.
At 2 pm I returned to my work to continue with my tasks.
At 5 pm I finished work and. I and my girlfriend went to a mall,. I was looking for a haircut but unfortunately, my favorite hairdresser wasn’t in the hair salon.
As we were in the mall, we decided to have a coffee and biscuit and talk about our day.
After that, we returned home, on the way, we bought some strawberries and grapes, we love to eat fruits.
When we were at home, I cooked some steak and vegetables for dinner.
At 8:00 pm, I took my English classes, which took around 2 hours.
In the meantime, my girlfriend was cooking the lunch for the next day.
Finally, we went to sleep, we were really tired.
Feedback
Awesome!
One day in my life
This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
This morning I woke up at 5 am, I didn’t have to do it, but I wanted to make some breakfast for my girlfriend before she left for her job, she didn’t have much time to do it. This morning I woke up at 5 am, I didn’t have to do it, but I wanted to make some breakfast for my girlfriend before she left for her job This morning I woke up at 5 am This morning I woke up at 5 am |
I cooked some eggs, a piece of bread, and a cup of coffee, it was delicious. I cooked some eggs, a piece of bread, and a cup of coffee I cooked some eggs, a piece of bread, and a cup of coffee This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
At 7 am, I started to work, I completed some tasks pending, and I joined in a call for 1 hour. At 7 am, I started to work, I completed some At 7 am, I started "started to work" sounds like you began some task, which may or may not be related to your job. Whereas "started work" sounds like you began your job specifically. At 7 am, I started to work |
I was very busy between 9 am and 12 pm, I had a ton of emails to read in my inbox. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I was very busy between 9 am and 12 pm, as I had a ton of emails to read in my inbox. I was very busy between 9 am and 12 pm |
At 12:30 I went out for lunch, and then, I went to the laundry. At 12:30 I went out for lunch, and then At 12:30 I went out for lunch, and then At 12:30 I went out for lunch, and then, I went to the laundr |
At 2 pm I returned to my work to continue with my tasks. This sentence has been marked as perfect! At 2 pm I returned to my work Sounds a bit more natural This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
At 5 pm I finished work and I and my girlfriend went to a mall, I was looking for a haircut but unfortunately, my favorite hairdresser wasn’t in the hair salon. At 5 pm I finished work At 5 pm I finished work Whenever you list yourself with other people (either using me or I), you should always put yourself last - though this is a common grammar mistake even for native speakers. At 5 pm I finished work and |
As we were in the mall, we decided to have a coffee and biscuit and talk about our day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! As we were in the mall, we decided to have This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
After that, we returned home, on the way, we bought some strawberries and grapes, we love to eat fruits. This sentence has been marked as perfect! After that, we returned home, and on the way, we bought some strawberries and grapes After that, we returned home |
When we were at home, I cooked some steak and vegetables for dinner. This sentence has been marked as perfect! When we When we |
At 8:00 pm, I took my English classes, which took around 2 hours. This sentence has been marked as perfect! At 8:00 pm, I This is fine if your had classes at a scheduled time (like at a school). If you're studying on your own, it maybe a bit more natural to say "I studied English for about 2 hours" instead. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
In the meantime, my girlfriend was cooking the lunch for the next day. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
In this case, "meantime" doesn't quite sound right to me. I think it's because usually when we say "meantime" the two tasks are directly related in some way, but I'm not 100% sure. In the meantime, my girlfriend was "Cooking" is okay too, but people use "making" more often. |
Finally, we went to sleep, we were really tired. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Finally, we went to sleep Finally, we went to sleep |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium