Feb. 23, 2023
One bussines trip
When our life getting normal.
After 3 years lock down in your own country.
What would happen if you can visit other countries now?
Some of my friends go to different countries in a weekly base.
If you got enough money and holiday that won’t be a problem.
But what would be more “cool” to them your friends will be…
My company send me for a business trip.
One of my friend she goes to three countries within a month!
USA, China and Europe.
I wish that happen to me.
When our life gets / is getting normal.
This isn’t a complete sentence (當你生活恢復正常⋯⋯). What are you trying to say?
After 3 years of lock down in your own country., what would happen if you could visit other countries now?
Some of my friends go to different countries ion a weekly baseis.
on a weekly basis
If you’ve got enough money and holidaytime off that won’t be a problem.
But what would be more “cool” to them yourmy friends will be…ould be… if my company sent me on a business trip.
I assume you’re talking about a hypothetical situation, and that your company isn’t actually sending you on a business trip.
One of my friend she goess is going to three countries within aone month / in a single month!
The USA, China and a country in Europe.
Europe isn’t a “country.”
I wish that would happen to me.
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They way you’ve broken your sentence into separate lines makes them hard to read and correct.
One bussiness trip
When oOur life gettingis beginning to return to normal.
After 3 years of lock down in your own country.
Some of my friends go to different countries in a weekly base.
If you got enough money and holidays that won’t be a problem.
But what would be viewed as more “cool” to themby your friends will be…
MIf my company sends me for a business trip.
One of my friend she goes to three countries within a month!
I wish that could happen to me.
One bussiness trip
When our life grettingurns to normal.
After 3 years of lock down in your own country.
What would happen if you can visited other countries now?
You can visit other countries now, so it's not a question of "what if you could" but rather "what would you do"
Some of my friends go to different countries ion a weekly baseis.
If you gotearn enough money and get a long enough holiday, then that won’t be a problem.
This is a complicated sentence, as all of it is conditional. It's easy to make a mistake here.
But what would be more “cool” to them your friends will be…
I'm not sure what you're trying to say here, sorry.
My company is sending me for a business trip.
One of my friend she goess went to three countries within a month!:
The colon (:) is there because it flows into the next sentence.
USA, China and Europe.
Just a note: Europe isn't a country :)
I wish that happen to meI could do that.
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Some of the sentences could be combined into one sentence. I would practice making sentences flow into each other more naturally. Great job :)
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I wish that happen to me. I wish I wish that could happen to me. I wish that would happen to me. |
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USA, China and Europe. USA, China and Europe. Just a note: Europe isn't a country :) The USA, China and a country in Europe. Europe isn’t a “country.” |
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One bussines trip One bus One bus |
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When our life getting normal. When our life
When our life gets / is getting normal. This isn’t a complete sentence (當你生活恢復正常⋯⋯). What are you trying to say? |
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After 3 years lock down in your own country. After 3 years of lock down in your After 3 years of lock down in your own country. After 3 years of lock down in your own country |
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What would happen if you can visit other countries now? What would happen if you You can visit other countries now, so it's not a question of "what if you could" but rather "what would you do" |
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Some of my friends go to different countries in a weekly base. Some of my friends go to different countries Some of my friends go to different countries Some of my friends go to different countries on a weekly basis |
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If you got enough money and holiday that won’t be a problem. If you This is a complicated sentence, as all of it is conditional. It's easy to make a mistake here. If you got enough money and holidays that won’t be a problem. If you’ve got enough money and |
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But what would be more “cool” to them your friends will be… But what would be more “cool” to them your friends will be… I'm not sure what you're trying to say here, sorry. But what would be viewed as more “cool” But what would be more “cool” to I assume you’re talking about a hypothetical situation, and that your company isn’t actually sending you on a business trip. |
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My company send me for a business trip. My company is sending me for a business trip.
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One of my friend she goes to three countries within a month! One of my friend The colon (:) is there because it flows into the next sentence. One of my friend One of my friend |
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