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July 12, 2023

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Once upon a time

Little Red Riding Hood decided to visit her grandmother who lived in the forest nearby. The oldlady had a small house on the top of tall tree. Why? Because in the forest lived also a fat wolf. He was driving crazy all his neighbors, always begging for food. That's why the only calm place in all the forest was the top of one tall and old oak. Just there lived the old lady who was just as old.

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Once upon a time

The oldlady had a small house on the top of tall tree.

The old lady had a small house on the top of a tall tree.

Because in the forest lived also a fat wolf.

Because a large wolf also lived in the forest.

He was driving crazy all his neighbors, always begging for food.

It drove all its neighbors crazy and was constantly begging for food.

That's why the only calm place in all the forest was the top of one tall and old oak.

That's why the only quiet place in the entire forest was the top of a big old oak tree.

Just there lived the old lady who was just as old.

Right there lived the old lady, who was just as old.

The old lady had a small house on the top of tall tree.

Because in the forest also lived also a fat wolf.

He was driving crazy all his neighbors crazy, always begging for food.

Just syntax errors

He was driving (noun) crazy.

That's why the only calm place in all ththe entire forest was the top of one tall and old oak.

"tall, old oak" works well here

Just tThere lived the old lady who was just as old.

(Up there lived the old lady who was just as old)

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Fun! ^^ Your description of the wolf driving the town crazy was funny, I look forward to more

Once upon a time


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Little Red Riding Hood decided to visit her grandmother who lived in the forest nearby.


The oldlady had a small house on the top of tall tree.


The old lady had a small house on the top of tall tree.

The oldlady had a small house on the top of tall tree.

The old lady had a small house on the top of a tall tree.

Why?


Because in the forest lived also a fat wolf.


Because in the forest also lived also a fat wolf.

Because in the forest lived also a fat wolf.

Because a large wolf also lived in the forest.

He was driving crazy all his neighbors, always begging for food.


He was driving crazy all his neighbors crazy, always begging for food.

Just syntax errors He was driving (noun) crazy.

He was driving crazy all his neighbors, always begging for food.

It drove all its neighbors crazy and was constantly begging for food.

That's why the only calm place in all the forest was the top of one tall and old oak.


That's why the only calm place in all ththe entire forest was the top of one tall and old oak.

"tall, old oak" works well here

That's why the only calm place in all the forest was the top of one tall and old oak.

That's why the only quiet place in the entire forest was the top of a big old oak tree.

Just there lived the old lady who was just as old.


Just tThere lived the old lady who was just as old.

(Up there lived the old lady who was just as old)

Just there lived the old lady who was just as old.

Right there lived the old lady, who was just as old.

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