This time I am goingo hiking with my friends from a hiking club.

I am going would be used instead, because its the present progressive of what you are doing :)

On my way to a hike

I am writing this entry on athe bus ton my way to a hike.

This time I’m go hiking with mysome friends from a hiking club.

They are asleeping right now because we gohad to get up early to take the bus.

I’ve just finished my breakfast.

Many bakeries near my apartment offer verysell delicious breads, but theyse are too greasy for me and so delicious that I always eat more than I need.

I really look forward to enjoyseeing the scenerym..

Actually, I enjoy every sthingle view during hiking because it’s qu I see when I’m out hiking. I find ite relaxing.

I think my English level limits my expressionswhat I can say.

On mMy wWay to hHike

I just finished myeating breakfast.

I ate half of the bread that I made last night.

Many bakeries near my apartment offerbake very delicious breads, but they are too greasy for me and so delicious that I always eat more than I need.

Today, we are going to see an area where the maple trees are turning red.

If you want to see the details and pictures of my last hike, you can find some here https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/5TpMtK9Bk4XQILqFz7yKLA ¶
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That’s all for tonightday.

You said you just ate breakfast, how come it's tonight?

On my way to hike

On My Way To Hike

I am writing this entry on a bus, which is taking me to a hike/ to a hiking trail.

This time I am goingo hiking with my friends from a hiking club.

future tense because you are still on the bus and have not started the hike yet, so it's going not go

I ate half of the bread that I made last night.

Grammatically, you must add 'of' but if you don't you will still be understood- many natives speak this way

Many bakeries near my apartment offer very delicious breads, but they are too greasy for mebuttery and so delicious that I always eat more than I neintended.

greasy has a negative connotation, meaning that when you describe the bread as greasy, I think of it badly. I would suggest using intend instead of need because you probably didn't need to eat the bread in the first place

I am really looking forward to enjoying the scenery.

Your first sentence still makes sense but is not very natural

Actually, I enjoy every single view duringwhen I hikinge because it’s quite relaxing.

This time I'm going hiking with my friends from a hiking club.

Many bakeries near my apartment offer very delicious breads, but they are too greasy for me and so delicious that I always eat more than I need.

The plural of bread is just bread; some words do that.

Actually, I enjoy every single view during hiking because it’s quite relaxing.