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The Egypt Exhibition in Yokohama

The weather was nice today.

I go to Egypt Exhibition in Yokohama.
first time Egypt Exhibition.
Very interesting.

Rial replica sarcophagus and many beautiful ornaments.

The tomb of Tutankhamun is mystical aura around them.

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The Egypt Exhibition in Yokohama

The Egypt Exhibition in Yokohama

The weather was nice today.

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The weather was nice today.

Very interesting.


VIt was very interesting. It was very interesting.

VIt was very interesting. It was very interesting.

VIt was very interesting. It was very interesting.

Very interesting. Very interesting.

informal style but not wrong

VIt was very interesting. It was very interesting.

VIt was very interesting. It was very interesting.

The Egypt Exhibition in Yokohama


The Egypt Eian exhibition in Yokohama The Egyptian exhibition in Yokohama

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The weather was nice today.


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I go to Egypt Exhibition in Yokohama.


I gwent to tohe Egyptian Exhibition in Yokohama. I went to the Egyptian Exhibition in Yokohama.

I go towent to the Egypt Exhibition in Yokohama. I went to the Egypt Exhibition in Yokohama.

went = 行った go = 行く Since you're talking about something that's already happened, it's better to use the past tense.

I go towent to the Egypt Exhibition in Yokohama. I went to the Egypt Exhibition in Yokohama.

Use the past tense, as you are referring to an event that already happened.

I go towent to the Egypt Exhibition in Yokohama. I went to the Egypt Exhibition in Yokohama.

I go towent to the Egypt Exhibition in Yokohama. I went to the Egypt Exhibition in Yokohama.

I gowent to Egypt Exhibition in Yokohama. I went to Egypt Exhibition in Yokohama.

past tense

first time Egypt Exhibition.


It was my first time at an Egyptian Exhibition. It was my first time at an Egyptian Exhibition.

It's my first time at the Egypt Exhibition. It's my first time at the Egypt Exhibition.

English needs a lot more connecting words than Japanese. When you might use no topic in Japanese, you often need some kind of pronoun like "it" in English.

It was my first time at the Egypt Exhibition. It was my first time at the Egypt Exhibition.

It was my first time at the Egypt Exhibition. It was my first time at the Egypt Exhibition.

very incomplete sentence

It was my first time at the Egypt Exhibition. It was my first time at the Egypt Exhibition.

first timeIt was my first time to see an Egypt Exhibition. It was my first time to see an Egypt Exhibition.

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Rial replica sarcophagus and many beautiful ornaments.


RThere was a rial replica sarcophagus and many other beautiful ornaments. There was a rial replica sarcophagus and many other beautiful ornaments.

RialThere was a replica sarcophagus and many beautiful ornaments. There was a replica sarcophagus and many beautiful ornaments.

Not sure what word "rial" is meant to be. If it's meant to be real, then "real replica" is unnatural - replicas don't count as real.

RialThere was a replica of the sarcophagus and many beautiful ornaments. There was a replica of the sarcophagus and many beautiful ornaments.

RiThere was a real replica sarcophagus and many beautiful ornaments. There was a real replica sarcophagus and many beautiful ornaments.

Rial replicaThere were replicas of the sarcophagus and many beautiful ornaments. There were replicas of the sarcophagus and many beautiful ornaments.

There are Rial rReplica sSarcophagus and many other beautiful ornaments. There are Rial Replica Sarcophagus and many other beautiful ornaments.

The tomb of Tutankhamun is mystical aura around them.


The tomb of Tutankhamun ishas a mystical aura around ithem. The tomb of Tutankhamun has a mystical aura around it.

The tomb of Tutankhamun ishad a mystical aura around ithem. The tomb of Tutankhamun had a mystical aura around it.

"them" is for more than one thing. Since there was one tomb, then you need "it"

The tomb of Tutankhamun ishad a mystical aura around ithem. The tomb of Tutankhamun had a mystical aura around it.

The tomb of Tutankhamun ishas a mystical aura around ithem. The tomb of Tutankhamun has a mystical aura around it.

The tomb of Tutankhamun ishas a mystical aura around them. The tomb of Tutankhamun has a mystical aura around them.

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