Nov. 5, 2022
Today i decided to practice my writing skills here, so let's started with how i spent my day
I woke up at twenty minutes past eight and i oversleep, because i had to spend my son to the camp.
So my morning started with running.
After i saw my son off, i could drink a cup of coffee and then fed my younger daughter.
When i done with my breakfast i called my friend and he gave me a ride to debate club, where we discussed privacy and it's borders.
I couldn't tell anything. That inspired me to practice more...
Finally i returned back to home, had a meal and put to bed my daughter. While she falling asleep i surfed into the internet trying to find some apps for my decision. How you can guess i met this site and now i am writing here to greet you)
Today iI decided to practice my writing skills here, so let's started with how iI spent my day.
Today I decided to practice my writing skills here, so let's start with how I spent my day.
"I", not "i" regardless of where its position is in a sentence.
I woke up at twenty minutes past eight and i. I oversleept, because iI had to spend my son to thea camp.
I woke up at twenty minutes past eight. I overslept, because I had to send my son to a camp.
So, my morning started with a running.
So, my morning started with a run.
After iI saw my son off, i couldI was able to drink a cup of coffee and then feed my younger daughter.
After I saw my son off, I was able to drink a cup of coffee and then feed my younger daughter.
When i done withfinished my breakfast, i called my friend and he gave me a ride to a debate club, where we discussed privacy and it's borderslimits(?).
When i finished my breakfast, i called my friend and he gave me a ride to a debate club, where we discussed privacy and its limits(?).
I couldn't tell anythingcontribute anything (to the discussion).
I couldn't contribute anything (to the discussion).
Finally, i returned back to home, had a meal and put to bed my daughter to bed.
Finally, i returned home, had a meal and put my daughter to bed.
While she was falling asleep i surfed into the internet, trying to find some apps for my decision.to practise my English.
While she was falling asleep i surfed the internet, trying to find some apps to practise my English.
HowAs you can guess i met, I came across this site and now iI am writing here to greet you)
As you can guess, I came across this site and now I am writing here to greet you)
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хорошо написано ) не забывайте, что "Я" нужно писать как "I", a не "i".
Today iI decided to practice my writing skills here, so let's started with how iI spent my day
Today I decided to practice my writing skills here, so let's start with how I spent my day
I woke up at twenty minutes past eight and i8.20am realising I oversleept, because i haI was supposed to spend my son to the camp.
I woke up at 8.20am realising I overslept, because I was supposed to send my son to the camp.
So mMy morning started with running.
My morning started with running.
After iI saw my son off, i couldI driank a cup of coffee and then I fed my younger daughter.
After I saw my son off, I drank a cup of coffee and then I fed my younger daughter.
When iI was done with my breakfast i, I called my friend and h. He gave me a ride to debate club, where we discussed privacy and it's borders.
When I was done with my breakfast, I called my friend. He gave me a ride to debate club, where we discussed privacy and it's borders.
Do you mean boarders or boundaries?
You can also split this sentence into two, as it would be easier to read.
That inspired me to practice more...
Finally iI returned back to home, had a meal and put to bed my daughter to bed.
Finally I returned home, had a meal and put my daughter to bed.
While she was falling asleep i, I surfed into the internet trying to find some apps for my decision.
While she was falling asleep, I surfed the internet trying to find some apps for my decision.
HowCould you can guess iI met this site and now iI am writing here to greet you).
Could you guess I met this site and now I am writing here to greet you.
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Remember to capitalise "I" when writing in English :)
Sounds like you had a busy day, hope you had good rest. Good job on the attempt!
Today iI decided to practice my writing skills here, so let's started with how iI spent my day
Today I decided to practice my writing skills here, so let's started with how I spent my day
I woke up at twenty minutes past eight and iI oversleept, because iI had to spend my son to the camp.
I woke up at twenty minutes past eight and I overslept, because I had to send my son to camp.
So my morning started with running. So my morning started with running.
You could also say "So I started my morning by running" or "So I started my morning with a run"
After iI saw my son off, i couldI driank a cup of coffee and then fed my younger daughter.
After I saw my son off, I drank a cup of coffee and then fed my younger daughter.
you could also say "I was able to drink a cup of coffee"
When i done withI finished my breakfast i, I called my friend andso he gacould give me a ride to debate club, where we discussed privacy and it's borders.
When I finished my breakfast, I called my friend so he could give me a ride to debate club, where we discussed privacy and its borders.
I couldn't tell anythinghad a hard time figuring out what to say.
I had a hard time figuring out what to say.
You could also say "I was barely able to say anything"
That inspired me to practice more...
Finally i, I returned back to home, had a meal and put to bed my daughter to bed.
Finally, I returned back home, had a meal and put my daughter to bed.
While she was falling asleep i, I surfed into the internet trying to find some apps for my decision.
While she was falling asleep, I surfed the internet trying to find some apps for my decision.
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Today i decided to practice my writing skills here, so let's started with how i spent my day
Today
Today
Today "I", not "i" regardless of where its position is in a sentence. |
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I woke up at twenty minutes past eight and i oversleep, because i had to spend my son to the camp.
I woke up at twenty minutes past eight and
I woke up at
I woke up at twenty minutes past eight |
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So my morning started with running. So my morning started with running. So my morning started with running. You could also say "So I started my morning by running" or "So I started my morning with a run"
So, my morning started with a run |
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After i saw my son off, i could drink a cup of coffee and then fed my younger daughter.
After you could also say "I was able to drink a cup of coffee"
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When i done with my breakfast i called my friend and he gave me a ride to debate club, where we discussed privacy and it's borders.
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When Do you mean boarders or boundaries? You can also split this sentence into two, as it would be easier to read.
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I couldn't tell anything.
I You could also say "I was barely able to say anything"
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That inspired me to practice more... This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Finally i returned back to home, had a meal and put to bed my daughter.
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Finally
Finally, i returned |
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While she falling asleep i surfed into the internet trying to find some apps for my decision.
While she was falling asleep
While she was falling asleep
While she was falling asleep i surfed |
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How you can guess i met this site and now i am writing here to greet you)
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