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The name of the wind

This is the third time I read this book. First time I am reading it in English, before I read it in Spanish and listened in English as well. I hope some day I would be able to read it in dutch but for now I am learning a lot of new words in English from it. It's not as complicated as before, I think my English went better since the last time I tried to read this book in English and I feel good. But I need to achieve a B2 level so I can study. I am having a really good time studying through this book, some grammar, especially past order of sentences because a huge part of this book is kvothe telling his story. I love this book, it's a same that the autor haven't done the whole trilogy. But you should read it and suffer with me :)
The name of the book is The name of the wind by Patrick rothfuss.

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This is the third time I am reading this book.

Matching tense with the later sentences

FIt's the first time I am reading it in English, before I read it previously in Spanish and listened to it in English as well.

I hope some day I wouldill be able to read it in dDutch but for now I am learning a lot of new words in English from it.

It's not as complicated as before, I think my English whas gottent better since the last time I tried to read this book in English and I feel good.

I am having a really good time studying through this book,. I'm learning some grammar, especially past order oftense sentences because a huge part of this book is kvothe telling his story.

I love this book, it's a shame that the author haven't done the whole trilogy.

The name of the book is "The nName of the wWind" by Patrick rRothfuss.

Best to set titles apart. You'll often see them written in italics in newspapers etc., but since this site doesn't support italics, quotes are another option.

The name of the wind

This is the third time I’ve read this book.

I’ve -> I have

FThe first time, I am reading it in English, before. Then I read it in Spanish, and listened (to it) in English as well.

I hope that some day I would’ll be able to read it in dDutch, but for now, I am (I’m) learning a lot of new words in English words from it.

It's not as complicated as before,. I think my English whas gottent better since the last time I tried to read this book in English, and Ithat feels good.

ButHowever, I need to achieve a B2 level so I can study.

I am having a really good time studying through this book, s. Some grammar, especially past the order of sentences, (?) because a huge part of this book is kKvothe telling his story.

I love this book, it's a shame that the author haven'sn’t done the whole trilogy.

But you should read it and suffer with me :)

The name of the book is The nName of tThe wWind by Patrick rRothfuss.

Major words of titles are capitalized.

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Good job!

The nName of the wWind

For titles, we capitalize most words that are not the tiny ones

This is the third time I read this book.

FIt's also the first time I a'm reading it in English, b. Before, I read it in Spanish, and I listened to it in English once as well.

I hope some day I wouldill be able to read it in dDutch but for now I am learning a lot of new words in English from it.

It's not as complicated as before,. I think my English whas gottent better since the last time I tried to read this book in English, and I feel good.

You could say "my English has gotten better" or even better would be to say "my English improved"

But I need to achieve a B2 level so I can study.

I am having a really good time studying through this book,reading this book and learning some grammar, especially past order of sentences because a huge part of this book is kKvothe telling his story.

I'm not sure what you mean by "past order of sentences" but we would really say that. Maybe you mean "especially seeing how sentences are ordered in the past tense"...?

I love this book, i. It's athe same that the autor haven't donauthor who wrote the whole trilogy.

But you should read it and suffer with me :)

The name of the book is The nName of the wWind by Patrick rRothfuss.

Names are also always capitalized.

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The name of the wind


The nName of the wWind

For titles, we capitalize most words that are not the tiny ones

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This is the third time I read this book.


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This is the third time I’ve read this book.

I’ve -> I have

This is the third time I am reading this book.

Matching tense with the later sentences

First time I am reading it in English, before I read it in Spanish and listened in English as well.


FIt's also the first time I a'm reading it in English, b. Before, I read it in Spanish, and I listened to it in English once as well.

FThe first time, I am reading it in English, before. Then I read it in Spanish, and listened (to it) in English as well.

FIt's the first time I am reading it in English, before I read it previously in Spanish and listened to it in English as well.

I hope some day I would be able to read it in dutch but for now I am learning a lot of new words in English from it.


I hope some day I wouldill be able to read it in dDutch but for now I am learning a lot of new words in English from it.

I hope that some day I would’ll be able to read it in dDutch, but for now, I am (I’m) learning a lot of new words in English words from it.

I hope some day I wouldill be able to read it in dDutch but for now I am learning a lot of new words in English from it.

It's not as complicated as before, I think my English went better since the last time I tried to read this book in English and I feel good.


It's not as complicated as before,. I think my English whas gottent better since the last time I tried to read this book in English, and I feel good.

You could say "my English has gotten better" or even better would be to say "my English improved"

It's not as complicated as before,. I think my English whas gottent better since the last time I tried to read this book in English, and Ithat feels good.

It's not as complicated as before, I think my English whas gottent better since the last time I tried to read this book in English and I feel good.

But I need to achieve a B2 level so I can study.


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ButHowever, I need to achieve a B2 level so I can study.

I am having a really good time studying through this book, some grammar, especially past order of sentences because a huge part of this book is kvothe telling his story.


I am having a really good time studying through this book,reading this book and learning some grammar, especially past order of sentences because a huge part of this book is kKvothe telling his story.

I'm not sure what you mean by "past order of sentences" but we would really say that. Maybe you mean "especially seeing how sentences are ordered in the past tense"...?

I am having a really good time studying through this book, s. Some grammar, especially past the order of sentences, (?) because a huge part of this book is kKvothe telling his story.

I am having a really good time studying through this book,. I'm learning some grammar, especially past order oftense sentences because a huge part of this book is kvothe telling his story.

I love this book, it's a same that the autor haven't done the whole trilogy.


I love this book, i. It's athe same that the autor haven't donauthor who wrote the whole trilogy.

I love this book, it's a shame that the author haven'sn’t done the whole trilogy.

I love this book, it's a shame that the author haven't done the whole trilogy.

But you should read it and suffer with me :)


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The name of the book is The name of the wind by Patrick rothfuss.


The name of the book is The nName of the wWind by Patrick rRothfuss.

Names are also always capitalized.

The name of the book is The nName of tThe wWind by Patrick rRothfuss.

Major words of titles are capitalized.

The name of the book is "The nName of the wWind" by Patrick rRothfuss.

Best to set titles apart. You'll often see them written in italics in newspapers etc., but since this site doesn't support italics, quotes are another option.

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