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Oli and Olga

They are two female dogs living in campaign and enjoy their life. The morning they came wake up their masters to be fed but also to see them and to be hugging by them too. After that they bring their toys to play together and with cats. After a difficult morning their master leave the house with her for a walk. During the walk, they meet other dogs, sometime they already know each other but sometimes they are new dogs. When they are new dogs Olga is very friendly but Oli is shy so she hides behind his master.
After this walk, it is the time for a nap and the last meal of the day. Finally their master go to bed and it is time for a night with a lot of dreams.

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Oli and Olga

Theyre are two female dogs living in campaignwho live in the countryside and enjoy their life.

La campagne = the countryside

TIn the mornings, they caome wake up their masters to be fed, but also to see them and to be hugging byhug them too.

As a routine: In the mornings,

After that, they bring their toys to play together and with the cats.

After a difficult morning, their master leaves the house with therm for a walk.

During the walk, they meet other dogs, s. Sometimes they already know each other, but sometimes they are new dogs.

When they aremeet new dogs, Olga is very friendly, but Oli is shy, so she hides behind hiser master.

Oli is female => she hides behind her master (the gender of the master is not involved; her = the dog)

After this walk, it is the time for a nap and the last meal of the day.

Finally, their master goes to bed, and it is time for a night with a lot of dreams.

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Good job

Oli and Olga

They are two female dogs living in campaignthe countryside and enjoying their life.

Theis morning they came to wake up their masters in order to be fed, but also to see them and to be hugginged by them too.

After that they bringought their toys to play together and with catsthe cats as well.

After a difficult morning, their master leaveft the house with her for a walk.

During the walk, they meet other dogs, sometimes they already know each other but somethose dogs, but other times they are new dogs.

When they are new dogs Olga is very friendly but Oli is shy so she hides behind his master.

If Oli is a male, "his", if Oli is also a female dog, "her".

After this walk, it is the time for a nap and the last meal of the day.

Finally their master goes to bed and it is time for a night with a lot of dreams.

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I suggest "owner" instead of master. Master kind of has a negative meaning. 😁

Oli and Olga


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They are two female dogs living in campaign and enjoy their life.


They are two female dogs living in campaignthe countryside and enjoying their life.

Theyre are two female dogs living in campaignwho live in the countryside and enjoy their life.

La campagne = the countryside

The morning they came wake up their masters to be fed but also to see them and to be hugging by them too.


Theis morning they came to wake up their masters in order to be fed, but also to see them and to be hugginged by them too.

TIn the mornings, they caome wake up their masters to be fed, but also to see them and to be hugging byhug them too.

As a routine: In the mornings,

After that they bring their toys to play together and with cats.


After that they bringought their toys to play together and with catsthe cats as well.

After that, they bring their toys to play together and with the cats.

After a difficult morning their master leave the house with her for a walk.


After a difficult morning, their master leaveft the house with her for a walk.

After a difficult morning, their master leaves the house with therm for a walk.

During the walk, they meet other dogs, sometime they already know each other but sometimes they are new dogs.


During the walk, they meet other dogs, sometimes they already know each other but somethose dogs, but other times they are new dogs.

During the walk, they meet other dogs, s. Sometimes they already know each other, but sometimes they are new dogs.

When they are new dogs Olga is very friendly but Oli is shy so she hides behind his master.


When they are new dogs Olga is very friendly but Oli is shy so she hides behind his master.

If Oli is a male, "his", if Oli is also a female dog, "her".

When they aremeet new dogs, Olga is very friendly, but Oli is shy, so she hides behind hiser master.

Oli is female => she hides behind her master (the gender of the master is not involved; her = the dog)

After this walk, it is the time for a nap and the last meal of the day.


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After this walk, it is the time for a nap and the last meal of the day.

Finally their master go to bed and it is time for a night with a lot of dreams.


Finally their master goes to bed and it is time for a night with a lot of dreams.

Finally, their master goes to bed, and it is time for a night with a lot of dreams.

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