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karlalou

Feb. 23, 2024

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Oku-Nikko

If I could go anywhere, I'd definitely like to go hiking in Oku-Nikko.
When I was a child, my family went there every summer, for just 2 or 3 days at a time. During the humid, hot months around Tokyo, the cool weather there was heavenly. I enjoyed every minute of the visits, but the best thing to me was the hiking. There, wooden walking trails were provided for easy walking and to preserve nature. As a child, I was fascinated by the idea of walking on those rather ragged wooden paths through the beautiful wetland. Every time we walked the same 6-kilo trail, but I was more grateful because of that and never got bored of it.


奥日光
もし、どこにでも行けるとしたら、私は迷わず奥日光へハイキングに行きたいです。
子供の頃、私の家族は毎年、夏に2,3日、奥日光へ行きました。東京近辺の蒸し暑い夏の間、涼しい奥日光の気候は天国のようです。滞在中は何をしていても楽しかったですが、私にとって一番はそこでのハイキングでした。そこには歩きやすさと湿原を守る目的で、木製の遊歩道が設けられていました。子供だった私は、美しい湿原のなかで荒削りな木の道の上を歩くということに魅了されました。毎回、同じ6キロの道を歩きましたが、私は飽きることなく、同じ道だったからこそ、なおさら良かったのです。

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Oku-Nikko

If I could go anywhere, I'd definitely like to go hiking in Oku-Nikko.

When I was a child, my family went there every summer, for just 2 or 3 days at a time.

During the humid, hot months around Tokyo, the cool weather there was heavenly.

I enjoyed every minute of the visits, but the best thing to me was the hiking.

There, wooden walking trails were provided for easy walking and to preserve nature.

I know exactly what you're referring to; I just didn't know the name for these, really. I kind of think of them as boardwalks. You could say that, but "wooden walking trails" is fine too.

As a child, I was fascinated by the idea of walking on those rather ragged wooden paths through the beautiful wetland.

Every time we walked the same 6-kilo trail, but I was more grateful because of that and never got bored of it.

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There's an area near me that's a wetland that also has those wooden trails. I agree that they're very nice and convenient.

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karlalou

Feb. 26, 2024

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Thank you. :)
I looked up and saw 'boardwalks' too, but it's also used at a shopping mall on beach, so, I was not sure, but I looked it up now again, and it says 'boardwalks' are for marsh or sand. They are narrow trails in the middle of nature, though, and not like a shipping mall at all.

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Oku-Nikko

If I could go anywhere, I'd definitely like to go hiking in Oku-Nikko.

When I was a child, my family went there every summer, for just 2 or 3two or three days at a time.

During the humid, and hot months aroundof Tokyo, the cool weather there wasfelt heavenly.

I enjoyed every minute of those visits, but the best thing topart for me was the hiking.

There, wooden walking trails were provided for easy walking and to preserve nature.

As a child, I was fascinated by the idea of walking on those rather ragged wooden paths through the beautiful wetland.

Every time we walked the same 6-kilokm trail, but I was more grateful because of that and never got bored of it.

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Sounds like a beautiful place!

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karlalou

Feb. 26, 2024

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Thank you. :)
Yes, that is a beautiful place with mountains and water falls and like that.

Oku-Nikko

If I could go anywhere, I'd definitely like to go hiking in Oku-Nikko.

When I was a child, my family went there every summer, for just 2 or 3 days at a time.

Duringe to the humid, hot months aroundin Tokyo, I felt that the cool weather there was heavenly.

I enjoyed every minute of the visits, but the best thing to me was thei liked the most was hiking.

There, wooden walking trails were provided for easy walking and to preserve nature.

As a child, I was fascinated by the idea of walking on those rather ragged wooden paths through the beautiful wetland.

Every time we walked the same 6-kilo trail, but I was more grateful because of that and never got bored of it.

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Good job, very few mistakes, i would love to visit that place too, considering in India we also have a similar climate to the one you were describing. Keep on writing!

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karlalou

Feb. 26, 2024

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Thank you. :)
Yes, you should visit there sometime. I've been trying to find similar trails, but I haven't been successful for that so far.

When I was a child, my family went there every summer, for just 2 tor 3 days at aeach time.

There, wooden walking trails were provided for easy walking and tohe preserveation of nature.

Every time, we walked the same 6-kilo km trail, but I was morealways grateful because offor that and never got bored of it.

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It flows very well! I also like hiking.

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karlalou

Feb. 26, 2024

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Thank you. :)
You do too! Yes, hiking is so refreshing!

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I enjoyed every minute of the visits, but the best thing to me was the hiking.


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I know exactly what you're referring to; I just didn't know the name for these, really. I kind of think of them as boardwalks. You could say that, but "wooden walking trails" is fine too.

As a child, I was fascinated by the idea of walking on those rather ragged wooden paths through the beautiful wetland.


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