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I am a woman, I am thirty-five years old, I live in Madrid, I have two childrens, a boy of ten years old and a girl of eight years old. I nurse and I work in a hospital in my city. I love my job because I love taking care people. In the little free time that I have, between children and job, I like dancing, painting and writing

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I love my job because I love taking care people.

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Hi¡


Hi¡! Hi!

Hi¡! Hi!

In English we don't use ¡ at all, only ! I don't know if it is used exactly the same, so someone else can probably explain better than I can.

I am a woman, I am thirty-five years old, I live in Madrid, I have two childrens, a boy of ten years old and a girl of eight years old.


I am a woman, I am thirty-five years old, woman. I live in Madrid, and I have two childrens, a boy of ten years -old boy and a girl ofn eight years -old girl. I am a thirty-five year old woman. I live in Madrid and I have two children, a ten year-old boy and an eight year-old girl.

When we have many topics, it's more natural to separate them into many sentences. But it was easy to understand you!

I am a woman, I am thirty- five years -old, I woman who lives in Madrid,. I have two childrens, a boy of ten years -old and a girl ofboy, and an eight years -old girl. I am a thirty five year-old woman who lives in Madrid. I have two children, a ten year-old boy, and an eight year-old girl.

Edited for better flow. Full sentence for readability: "I am a thirty five year-old woman who lives in Madrid. I have two children, a ten year-old boy, and an eight year-old girl."

I nurse and I work in a hospital in my city.


I am a nurse and I work in a hospital in my city. I am a nurse and I work in a hospital in my city.

I am a nurse and I work in a hospital in my city. I am a nurse and I work in a hospital in my city.

Here you used "nurse" as a verb, but here it makes more sense to give a job title. So you would say that you are a nurse.

I love my job because I love taking care people.


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In the little free time that I have, between children and job, I like dancing, painting and writing


In the little free time that I have, between my children and my job, I like dancing, painting and writing. In the little free time that I have between my children and my job, I like dancing, painting and writing.

In the little free time that I have, between my children and my job, I like dancing, painting and writing. In the little free time that I have, between my children and my job, I like dancing, painting and writing.

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