In the morning I waoke up late, around 9.30am and the awakening. Waking up was beautiful because was my daughter who woke me up with a kiss. In the morning I woke up late, around 9.30am. Waking up was beautiful because was my daughter woke me up with a kiss.

In the morning I waoke up late, around 9.:30am, and the awakening was beautiful because was my daughter who woke me up with a kiss. In the morning I woke up late, around 9:30am, and the awakening was beautiful because my daughter woke me up with a kiss.

More natural: "I woke up late this morning, around 9:30am. Waking up was beautiful, because my daughter woke me up with a kiss."

In the morning I wake up late, around 9.30am and the awakening was beautiful because was my daughter who woke me up with a kiss. In the morning I wake up late, around 9.30am and the awakening was beautiful because was my daughter who woke me up with a kiss.

To make it feel more natural you could say “ I woke up late this morning, around 9:30am, by the beautiful daughter who gave me a kiss”

In the afternoon I accompanied my son to the pool, because Hhe receivesis taking swimming classes. In the afternoon I accompanied my son to the pool because he is taking swimming classes.

In the afternoon, I accompanied my son to the pool, because Hhe receives swimming classes. In the afternoon, I accompanied my son to the pool, because he receives swimming classes.

More natural, "In the afternoon, I went with my son to the pool for his swimming lessons."

ILater in the afternoon, I accompanied my son to the pool, because Hhe receives swimming classes. Later in the afternoon, I accompanied my son to the pool, because he receives swimming classes.

When we went back home, my daughter fell asleep and my son stayed so quiet. When we went back home, my daughter fell asleep and my son stayed so quiet.

“When we returned home…” would also work well.

Right now, is the night in my city, and the rest of afternoon was quite quiet.The rest of afternoon was quite quiet and it’s now nighttime in my city. The rest of afternoon was quite quiet and it’s now nighttime in my city.

It’s clearer to have the order of events chronological.

Right now, is thet's night in my city, and the rest of afternoon was quite quiet. Right now, it's night in my city, and the rest of afternoon was quite quiet.

Right now, its the night time in my city, and the rest of afternoon was quite quiet. Right now, its night time in my city, and the rest of afternoon was quite quiet.