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Hadassa

yesterday

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My days

Today I go to school, I like but is tiring.
I don't have friends but it's fine. I have one brother.
I enjoy estudying end I do weel in school.
My dream is go to Europe.


Todos dias vou para escola, eu gosto mas é cansativo. Eu não tenho amigos mas é legal.
Eu gosto de estudar e tiro boas notas.
Meu sonho é ir para Europa

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My dDays

Today, I gowent to school,; I like buit, but it is tiring.

I don't have friends, but it's fine.

I have one brother.

I enjoy estudying end.

I do weell in school.

My dream is go to Europe.

Feedback

Nice! Where do you want to go in Europe?

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marblemenow

yesterday

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I also forgot to correct this sentence: My dream is to go to Europe.

My days

Today I gowent to school,. I like but it is tiring.

I don't have friends, but it's fine.

I have one brother.

I enjoy estudying eand

I do weell in school.

My dream is to go to Europe.

My dDays

Today, I gwent to tohe school,. I likeenjoyed it but it was tiring.

At least I have onemy brother.

I enjoy estudying eand

I do weell in school.

My dDays

It is "My Day" because today is only one day and both have capital letters because it is the title.

Today I gowent to school, I like it but it was tiring.

When you are talking in the past make sure to change the verbs into the past tense; "go" turns into "went" and "is" turns into "was".
"I liked IT": the "IT" refers to the day (today).

I don't have friends but it's fine.

I have onea brother.

"I have a brother" sounds more natural when writing and speaking, but "I have one brother" is also correct.

I enjoy estudying eand

There is not "e" in "studying" and "and".

I do weell in school.

There is a double "L" in "well".

My dream is to go to Europe. OR I wish to go to Europe someday.

As you haven't gone to Europe yet say "to go" instead. Also, when you have a congregated verb (is) and want to add another on behind it make sure it isn't congregated/ the 2nd verb stays in the "to go" form.

Feedback

The main idea of your written piece is clear and organised. If you fix some small mistakes you will be doing great! Good luck!

My dDays

Capitalize nouns in titles!

Today I gowent to school,. I like buit, but it is tiring.

Need to add "it" to connect the previous sentence to show that "school" is the thing you like.

I don't have friends, but it's fine.

I have one brother.

I enjoy estudying. end

I do weell in school.

My dream is go to Europe.

Feedback

Good job!

Keep at it and you will keep improving!

My day


Today I go to school, I like but is tiring.


Today I gowent to school,. I like buit, but it is tiring.

Need to add "it" to connect the previous sentence to show that "school" is the thing you like.

Today I gowent to school, I like it but it was tiring.

When you are talking in the past make sure to change the verbs into the past tense; "go" turns into "went" and "is" turns into "was". "I liked IT": the "IT" refers to the day (today).

Today, I gwent to tohe school,. I likeenjoyed it but it was tiring.

Today I gowent to school,. I like but it is tiring.

Today, I gowent to school,; I like buit, but it is tiring.

I don't have friends but it's fine.


I don't have friends, but it's fine.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't have friends, but it's fine.

I don't have friends, but it's fine.

I have one brother.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have onea brother.

"I have a brother" sounds more natural when writing and speaking, but "I have one brother" is also correct.

At least I have onemy brother.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I enjoy estudying end


I enjoy estudying. end

I enjoy estudying eand

There is not "e" in "studying" and "and".

I enjoy estudying eand

I enjoy estudying eand

I enjoy estudying end.

I do weel in school.


I do weell in school.

I do weell in school.

There is a double "L" in "well".

I do weell in school.

I do weell in school.

I do weell in school.

My dream is go to Europe.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My dream is to go to Europe. OR I wish to go to Europe someday.

As you haven't gone to Europe yet say "to go" instead. Also, when you have a congregated verb (is) and want to add another on behind it make sure it isn't congregated/ the 2nd verb stays in the "to go" form.

My dream is to go to Europe.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My days


My dDays

Capitalize nouns in titles!

My dDays

It is "My Day" because today is only one day and both have capital letters because it is the title.

My dDays

My days

My dDays

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