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Report: how to improve our school

Introduction
The purpose of this report is to enumerate some improvements that could be carry them out in the outskirts of our school.

Main upgrades
The two principal improvements should be executed are:
- Alternative sports equipment. The school already has popular's sports facilities as basketball and football fields. But, I think it's important giving to the students the opportunity to practice other less popular sports such as tennis, volleyball, baseball...
- Green areas. In the school we don't have any natural space to spare. The placement of a park near the school would to be a good way to disconnect during the classes breaks.

Other improvements
Although the school neighbourhood is quite safe, sometimes there are fights with students from nearby schools. Hire security personnel could help to reduce these awkward situations.
Last but not least, it's very usual to see traffic jams in the first and the last classes times. I should recommend to set up parking spaces in the surroundings or increase the scholar buses number.

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Introduction

Main upgrades

- Alternative sports equipment.

- Green areas.

Other improvements

Although the school neighbourhood is quite safe, sometimes there are fights with students from nearby schools.

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Report: how to improve our school


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Introduction


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Main upgrades


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- Alternative sports equipment.


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The school already has popular's sports facilities as basketball and football fields.


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But, I think it's important giving to the students the opportunity to practice other less popular sports such as tennis, volleyball, baseball...


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- Green areas.


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In the school we don't have any natural space to spare.


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The placement of a park near the school would to be a good way to disconnect during the classes breaks.


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Other improvements


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Although the school neighbourhood is quite safe, sometimes there are fights with students from nearby schools.


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Hire security personnel could help to reduce these awkward situations.


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Last but not least, it's very usual to see traffic jams in the first and the last classes times.


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I should recommend to set up parking spaces in the surroundings or increase the scholar buses number.


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