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tana_gao

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230131 - Just be myself

In hip-hop culture, "be real" is important. I am afraid to face myself. The question is that what will happen if I find that I am a jerk in nature? So writing is also a tough progress for me. I have learned to repress my emotion.

"During the lockdown time, I suffer a lot."

Gosh, when I write this sentence, I judge myself: omg, am I a Debbie Downer to destroy the happy situation? Then I cannot write anything in the past hour.

Sorry, this is today's writing. I need to write more personally about sorrowful topics and edit them better for the public.

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I am afraid to face myself.

I have learned to repress my emotion.

Gosh, when I write this sentence, I judge myself: omg, am I a Debbie Downer to destroy the happy situation?

Then I cannot write anything in the past hour.

Sorry, this is today's writing.

I need to write more personally about sorrowful topics and edit them better for the public.

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tana_gao

Feb. 26, 2023

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I am afraid to face myself.

So writing is also a tough progress for me.

Then I cannot write anything in the past hour.

Sorry, this is today's writing.

I need to write more personally about sorrowful topics and edit them better for the public.

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tana_gao

Feb. 26, 2023

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In hip-hop culture, "be real" is important.

I am afraid to face myself.

The question is that what will happen if I find that I am a jerk in nature?

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mari

Feb. 2, 2023

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tana_gao

Feb. 26, 2023

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fyi I wrote this with you and some others in mind: https://langcorrect.com/journal/no-206-langcorrect%E3%81%AE%E8%8B%B1%E8%AA%9E%E3%81%AE%E5%AD%A6%E7%BF%92%E8%80%85%E3%81%B8-1/

230131 - Just be myself


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This is a terrific title.

In hip-hop culture, "be real" is important.


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In hip-hop culture, "be real" is important. In hip-hop culture "be real" is important.

In hip-hop culture, "being real" is important. In hip-hop culture, "being real" is important.

Gerund: to use verbs as a noun, you have to use the infinitive: "to be" or the gerund: "being" To be real is important Being real is important

I am afraid to face myself.


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The question is that what will happen if I find that I am a jerk in nature?


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The question is that what will happen if I find out that I am a jerk in naturenatural jerk? The question is what will happen if I find out that I am a natural jerk?

A jerk in nature sounds like you're bad when your outdoors

So writing is also a tough progress for me.


So writing is also a tough progress for me. So writing is also tough for me.

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So making progress in writing is also a tough progress for me. So making progress in writing is also tough for me.

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I have learned to repress my emotion.


I have learned to repress my emotions. I have learned to repress my emotions.

I find this so heartbreaking.

I have learned to repress my emotions. I have learned to repress my emotions.

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"During the lockdown time, I suffer a lot."


"During the lockdown time, I suffered a lot." "During lockdown, I suffered a lot."

Many of us did. :(

"During the lockdown time, I suffered a lot." "During the lockdown I suffered a lot."

"During the lockdown time, I suffered a lot." "During the lockdown time, I suffered a lot."

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Gosh, when I write this sentence, I judge myself: omg, am I a Debbie Downer to destroy the happy situation?


Gosh, when I write this sentence, I judge myself: , "omg, am I a Debbie Downer here to destroy thea happy situation?" Gosh, when I write this sentence, I judge myself, "omg, am I a Debbie Downer here to destroy a happy situation?"

It's okay to write whatever here as long as you don't criticize other countries or are mean to people. This is *your* journal.

Gosh, when I write this sentence, I judge myself:; omg, am I a Debbie Downer to destroy theruin a happy situation? Gosh, when I write this sentence, I judge myself; omg, am I a Debbie Downer to ruin a happy situation?

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Then I cannot write anything in the past hour.


Then I canould not write anything in the past hour. Then I could not write anything in the past hour.

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Sorry, this is today's writing.


Sorry, this is today's writingpost. Sorry, this is today's post.

Please don't feel the need to apologize to us. Expressing our feelings is important and you express yours so beautifully! I look forward to reading your posts.

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I need to write more personally about sorrowful topics and edit them better for the public.


I need to write more personalintimately about sorrowful topics and edit them better for the public. I need to write more intimately about sorrowful topics and edit them better for the public.

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