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VnukPuk

Aug. 14, 2023

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official email for applying the job in BES company

Dear Mr Balik,
My name is Kseniya. I'm writing to apply for the position of the desiner of houshold forniture. I worked for ASIOS company for 3 years. I took care about desining office forniture there for 2 years. I think that my skills and experiense make me a good candidate for this job.
Also Can you sent to me please information about BES's work experience programme?
Best wishes,
Kseniya Unukuk.

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Aug. 21, 2023

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official email for applying the job in BES company


Dear Mr Balik, My name is Kseniya.


Dear Mr. Balik, My name is Kseniya. Dear Mr. Balik, My name is Kseniya.

I'm writing to apply for the position of the desiner of houshold forniture.


I'm writing to apply for the position of the designer of household fourniture. I'm writing to apply for the position of the designer of household furniture.

I worked for ASIOS company for 3 years.


I worked forat the ASIOS company for 3 years. I worked at the ASIOS company for 3 years.

I took care about desining office forniture there for 2 years.


I took care aboutwas responsible for designing office fourniture there for 2 years. I was responsible for designing office furniture there for 2 years.

I think that my skills and experiense make me a good candidate for this job.


I think that my skills and experiensce make me a good candidate for this job. I think that my skills and experience make me a good candidate for this job.

Also Can you sent to me please information about BES's work experience programme?


Also C, can you sent to me pleasplease send me the information about BES's work experience programme? Also, can you please send me the information about BES's work experience program?

Best wishes, Kseniya Unukuk.


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