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Vinson

Nov. 28, 2025

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Office Routine

I arrive at office at around 9:00 AM. After reaching my workstation, I trun on my computer to check if there's missed message first. Then I make myself a cup of coffee bought from Sam's Club, it's sort of delicious. After that, sipping the coffee, I prepare for my daily work schedule.

At around 10:00 AM, I begin my work. At around 11:30AM, I go out of our office building to have luch. We have more than two hours of lunch break, so I usually take a nap or browse some stuff in my car after my lunch.

Before 2:00 PM, I go back to my workstation and continue my work. At around 5:30, it's time for dinner.

Before 7:00PM, I go back to my workstation to finish today's work, it might go on until 8:00 PM or 9:00 PM. Then I prepare to go home.

This is my office routine, would you please share yours to me? ^_^

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Office Routine

I arrive at the office at around 9:00 AM.

After reaching my workstation, I trurn on my computer to check if there's are any missed messages first.

You can also say, "... to check if I missed any messages first."

Then I make myself a cup of coffee bought from Sam's Club, it's sort of delicious.

After that, sipping the coffee, I prepare for my daily work schedule.

At around 10:00 AM, I begin my work.

At around 11:30AM, I go out of our office building to have lunch.

We have more than two hours of lunch break, so I usually take a nap or browse some stuff in my car after my lunch.

Before 2:00 PM, I go back to my workstation and continue my work.

At around 5:30, it's time for dinner.

Before 7:00PM, I go back to my workstation to finish today's work, it might go on until 8:00 PM or 9:00 PM.

This is my office routine, would you please share yours towith me? ^_^

For the verb share- you share "to" a website or social media, and share "with" a person.

Office Routine

I arrive at the/my office at around 9:00 AM.

After reaching my workstation, first I trurn on my computer to check if there's missedany new message firsts or emails.

If you're checking your email, it's good to write "email" here. But if you want to be inclusive for messages on another application (e.g., Teams, Slack), you can write this.

Then I make myself a cup of coffee bought from Sam's Club, it's sort ofrather delicious.

No need for "bought" as it's implied with "from" already. To soften the fairly strong word "delicious," you can use "rather"

After that, sipping the coffee, I prepare for my daily work schedule while sipping my coffee.

More natural

At around 10:00 AM, I begin my workstart working on other tasks.

I would not phrase it this way, because technically you began your work an hour ago. But I think you mean getting into specific tasks as part of your job, so I offer this alternative.

At around 11:30 AM, I go out of ourleave the office building to have lunch.

This is a bit more concise

We have more than two hours of lunch break, so I usually take a nap or browse some stuff in my car after my lunch.

Before 2:00 PM, I go back to my workstation and continue my work.

At around 5:30, it's time for dinner.

Before 7:00 PM, I go back to my workstation to finish tohe day's work, itwhich might go on until 8:00 PM or 9:00 PM.

No need to say "PM" twice at the end. You can also skip the :00 and just write 7 PM / 8 PM/ 9 PM here

Then I prepare to go home.

This is my office routine, w. Would you please share yours towith me? ^_^

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Wow, that's intense! I don't work in an office anymore... I sure don't miss it, either.

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Vinson

Nov. 29, 2025

4

Thanks so much

Office Routine

I arrive at office at around 9:00 AM.

After reaching my work station, I trurn on my computer to check if there's are any missed message first.

Then I make myself a cup of coffee bought from Sam's Club, i. It's sort of delicious.

I would split this into two separate sentences.

After that, sippingWhile I sip the coffee, I prepare for my daily work schedule.

At around 10:00 AM, I begin my work.

At around 11:30 AM, I go out ofleave our office building to have lunch.

We have more than two hours ofor our lunch break, so I usually take a nap or browse some stuff in my car after my lunch.

Before 2:00 PM, I go back to my workstation and continue my work.

At around 5:30 PM, it's time for dinner.

Adding this for consistency.

Before 7:00 PM, I go back to my workstation to finish today's work, itwhich might go ontake until 8:00 PM or 9:00 PM to finish.

Then I prepare to go home.

This is my office routine, would you please share yours towith me? ^_^

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Great job! Just a few small errors that I touched up. Seems like a long work day for you!

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Vinson

Nov. 29, 2025

4

Thanks.

Office Routine

I arrive at office at around 9:00 AM.

After reaching my workstation, I trurn on my computer to check if there's are any missed messages first.

Then I make myself a cup of coffee bought from Sam's Club, it's sort of delicious.

Grammar is okay, but "sort of delicious" is a weird way to phrase it (unless you're purposely being funny). Maybe you want to say something like, "It tastes okay" or "It's good enough."

After that, sipping the coffee, I prepare for my daily work schedule.

At around 10:00 AM, I begin my work.

At around 11:30AM, I go out of our office building to have lunch.

We have more than two hours of lunch break, so I usually take a nap or browse some stuff in my car after my lunch.

Before 2:00 PM, I go back to my workstation and continue my work.

At around 5:30, it's time for dinner.

Before 7:00PM, I go back to my workstation to finish today's work, it might go on until 8:00 PM or 9:00 PM.

Then I prepare to go home.

This is my office routine, would you please share yours to me? ^_^

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At first I was jealous, hearing you have a 2+ hour lunch break! But then I saw that you don't go home until 8 or 9 PM. Yikes!

I work from 9-6 with a one-hour lunch break. But I work from home three days a week, and when I work from home, I often take more breaks. :)

Your English is very good!

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Vinson

Nov. 28, 2025

4

The one should be jealous is me,lol. You really work at a dream company!
About "sort of delicious", I mean it's delicious but not much.

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riddlememiss

Nov. 28, 2025

0

The issue with "sort of delicious" is that delicious means *very* good-tasting. It's a strong adjective. Since "sort of" weakens the meaning, it doesn't make sense to combine it with such a strong word. It's better to use a weaker adjective.

Here are some ways of expressing how it tastes, from worst to best.
It tastes bad.
It tastes okay/fine/all right.
It tastes good.
It tastes pretty great, but it's not the best.
It tastes great/delicious/wonderful.

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Vinson

Nov. 28, 2025

4

What a comprehensive teaching! Thanks so much!

Office Routine


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I arrive at office at around 9:00 AM.


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I arrive at the/my office at around 9:00 AM.

I arrive at the office at around 9:00 AM.

After reaching my workstation, I trun on my computer to check if there's missed message first.


After reaching my workstation, I trurn on my computer to check if there's are any missed messages first.

After reaching my work station, I trurn on my computer to check if there's are any missed message first.

After reaching my workstation, first I trurn on my computer to check if there's missedany new message firsts or emails.

If you're checking your email, it's good to write "email" here. But if you want to be inclusive for messages on another application (e.g., Teams, Slack), you can write this.

After reaching my workstation, I trurn on my computer to check if there's are any missed messages first.

You can also say, "... to check if I missed any messages first."

Then I make myself a cup of coffee bought from Sam's Club, it's sort of delicious.


Then I make myself a cup of coffee bought from Sam's Club, it's sort of delicious.

Grammar is okay, but "sort of delicious" is a weird way to phrase it (unless you're purposely being funny). Maybe you want to say something like, "It tastes okay" or "It's good enough."

Then I make myself a cup of coffee bought from Sam's Club, i. It's sort of delicious.

I would split this into two separate sentences.

Then I make myself a cup of coffee bought from Sam's Club, it's sort ofrather delicious.

No need for "bought" as it's implied with "from" already. To soften the fairly strong word "delicious," you can use "rather"

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After that, sipping the coffee, I prepare for my daily work schedule.


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After that, sippingWhile I sip the coffee, I prepare for my daily work schedule.

After that, sipping the coffee, I prepare for my daily work schedule while sipping my coffee.

More natural

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At around 10:00 AM, I begin my work.


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At around 10:00 AM, I begin my workstart working on other tasks.

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At around 11:30AM, I go out of our office building to have luch.


At around 11:30AM, I go out of our office building to have lunch.

At around 11:30 AM, I go out ofleave our office building to have lunch.

At around 11:30 AM, I go out of ourleave the office building to have lunch.

This is a bit more concise

At around 11:30AM, I go out of our office building to have lunch.

We have more than two hours of lunch break, so I usually take a nap or browse some stuff in my car after my lunch.


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Before 2:00 PM, I go back to my workstation and continue my work.


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At around 5:30, it's time for dinner.


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At around 5:30 PM, it's time for dinner.

Adding this for consistency.

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Before 7:00PM, I go back to my workstation to finish today's work, it might go on until 8:00 PM or 9:00 PM.


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Before 7:00 PM, I go back to my workstation to finish today's work, itwhich might go ontake until 8:00 PM or 9:00 PM to finish.

Before 7:00 PM, I go back to my workstation to finish tohe day's work, itwhich might go on until 8:00 PM or 9:00 PM.

No need to say "PM" twice at the end. You can also skip the :00 and just write 7 PM / 8 PM/ 9 PM here

Before 7:00PM, I go back to my workstation to finish today's work, it might go on until 8:00 PM or 9:00 PM.

Then I prepare to go home.


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This is my office routine, would you please share yours to me? ^_^


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This is my office routine, would you please share yours towith me? ^_^

This is my office routine, w. Would you please share yours towith me? ^_^

This is my office routine, would you please share yours towith me? ^_^

For the verb share- you share "to" a website or social media, and share "with" a person.

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