Office Routine

Vinson

today

I arrive at office at around 9:00 AM. After reaching my workstation, I trun on my computer to check if there's missed message first. Then I make myself a cup of coffee bought from Sam's Club, it's sort of delicious. After that, sipping the coffee, I prepare for my daily work schedule.

At around 10:00 AM, I begin my work. At around 11:30AM, I go out of our office building to have luch. We have more than two hours of lunch break, so I usually take a nap or browse some stuff in my car after my lunch.

Before 2:00 PM, I go back to my workstation and continue my work. At around 5:30, it's time for dinner.

Before 7:00PM, I go back to my workstation to finish today's work, it might go on until 8:00 PM or 9:00 PM. Then I prepare to go home.

This is my office routine, would you please share yours to me? ^_^

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riddlememiss

Office Routine

I arrive at office at around 9:00 AM.

After reaching my workstation, I trurn on my computer to check if there's are any missed messages first.

Then I make myself a cup of coffee bought from Sam's Club, it's sort of delicious.

Grammar is okay, but "sort of delicious" is a weird way to phrase it (unless you're purposely being funny). Maybe you want to say something like, "It tastes okay" or "It's good enough."

After that, sipping the coffee, I prepare for my daily work schedule.

At around 10:00 AM, I begin my work.

At around 11:30AM, I go out of our office building to have lunch.

We have more than two hours of lunch break, so I usually take a nap or browse some stuff in my car after my lunch.

Before 2:00 PM, I go back to my workstation and continue my work.

At around 5:30, it's time for dinner.

Before 7:00PM, I go back to my workstation to finish today's work, it might go on until 8:00 PM or 9:00 PM.

Then I prepare to go home.

This is my office routine, would you please share yours to me? ^_^

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At first I was jealous, hearing you have a 2+ hour lunch break! But then I saw that you don't go home until 8 or 9 PM. Yikes!

I work from 9-6 with a one-hour lunch break. But I work from home three days a week, and when I work from home, I often take more breaks. :)

Your English is very good!

Vinson

today

The one should be jealous is me,lol. You really work at a dream company!
About "sort of delicious", I mean it's delicious but not much.

riddlememiss

today

The issue with "sort of delicious" is that delicious means *very* good-tasting. It's a strong adjective. Since "sort of" weakens the meaning, it doesn't make sense to combine it with such a strong word. It's better to use a weaker adjective.

Here are some ways of expressing how it tastes, from worst to best.
It tastes bad.
It tastes okay/fine/all right.
It tastes good.
It tastes pretty great, but it's not the best.
It tastes great/delicious/wonderful.

Vinson

today

What a comprehensive teaching! Thanks so much!

Office Routine