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My fifth journal: "How I am learning the English Languege"

Today is Saturday. I got up near 11 am. It was late for me. Usually I get up at 7 or 8 am. Why I got up so late? In the morning I skipped my alarm. I thought sleep 10 minute and got up. It was my big mistake.
After that I was work little bit. Then I made a lunch and I went center city. Just walked and met friend. I with my friend met in Burger King and ate some burgers. Honest I rarely ate burgers and similar food.
You ask me: What about English?
I answer. I read one episode comic One Punch Man. I listened 3 episodes podcast. Finnaly I wrote this journal. That's all.
I know it was few but it's good then nothing.

Thank for reading my journal.
See you tomorow.

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Today is Saturday.

It was late for me.

Usually I get up at 7 or 8 am.

That's all.

See you tomorow.

See you tomorow.


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My fifth journal: "How I am learning the English Languege"


My fifth journal: "How I am learning the English Langueage" My fifth journal: "How I am learning the English Language"

Today is Saturday.


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I got up near 11 am.


I got up nearat around 11 am. I got up at around 11 am.

I got up nearound 11 am. I got up around 11 am.

you can also say I woke up

It was late for me.


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Usually I get up at 7 or 8 am.


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Why I got up so late?


Why did I goet up so late? Why did I get up so late?

Why did I goet up so late? Why did I get up so late?

In the morning I skipped my alarm.


In the morning I skippnoozed my alarm. In the morning I snoozed my alarm.

you can also say ‘hit snooze on’

I thought sleep 10 minute and got up.


I thought I'd sleep for 10 minute and gotore minutes before getting up. I thought I'd sleep for 10 more minutes before getting up.

Also could be written as "I wanted to sleep for 10 more minutes before getting up."

I thought I would sleep 10 minute andore minutes then goet up. I thought I would sleep 10 more minutes then get up.

the tense of this sentence is a hypothetical action in the past

It was my big mistake.


IThat was mya big mistake. That was a big mistake.

Sounds a bit unnatural to me, so I gave it a slight adjustment.

IThat was mya big mistake. That was a big mistake.

After that I was work little bit.


After that I was workorked for a little bit. After that I worked for a little bit.

After that I was workorked a little bit. After that I worked a little bit.

Then I made a lunch and I went center city.


Then I made a lunch and I went to center city. Then I made a lunch and went to center city.

Then I made a lunch and I went center citydowntown. Then I made lunch and I went downtown.

In the US you would call the city center downtown.

Just walked and met friend.


JustI just took a walked and met up with friend. I just took a walk and met up with friend.

hung out instead of met up can also work!

Just walked and met a friend. Just walked and met a friend.

I with my friend met in Burger King and ate some burgers.


I met with my friend met in Burger King and ate some burgers. I met with my friend in Burger King and ate some burgers.

I with met my friend met inat Burger King and ate some burgers. I met my friend at Burger King and ate some burgers.

Honest I rarely ate burgers and similar food.


Honestly, I rarely eate burgers and similar food things like burgers. Honestly, I rarely eat things like burgers.

Honestly, I rarely eate burgers andor similar food. Honestly, I rarely eat burgers or similar food.

You ask me: What about English?


You might ask me: "What about your English? studies?" You might ask: "What about your English studies?"

You may ask me: What about English? You may ask: What about English?

I answer.


IThese are my answers. These are my answers.

I will answer.: I will answer:

I read one episode comic One Punch Man.


I read one episodchapter of the comic One Punch Man. I read one chapter of the comic One Punch Man.

I read one episodissue of the comic One Punch Man. I read one issue of the comic One Punch Man.

I listened 3 episodes podcast.


I listened to 3 episodes of a podcast. I listened to 3 episodes of a podcast.

I listened to 3 episodes of a podcast. I listened to 3 episodes of a podcast.

Finnaly I wrote this journal.


Finnally, I wrote this journal. Finally, I wrote this journal.

Finnally I wrote this journal. Finally I wrote this journal.

That's all.


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I know it was few but it's good then nothing.


I know it was fewn't much but it's goodbetter thean nothing. I know it wasn't much but it's better than nothing.

I know it was fewn’t a lot but it's goodbetter thean nothing. I know it wasn’t a lot but it's better than nothing.

Thank for reading my journal.


Thank you for reading my journal. Thank you for reading my journal.

Or "Thanks" which is more casual.

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