March 5, 2024
Odaiba in Tokyo (57)
There's a city called "Odaiba" in Tokyo.
It's a very busy area and always crowded.
There's a commercial complex called "Odaiba decks Tokyo" in there.
You can enjoy a trick art museum, a haunted house and a game arcade.
You can also enjoy shopping, and eating.
I like the Takoyaki museum on the 4th floor.
There are many takoyaki shops and each shop has interesting variety of takoyaki.
My favorite is the one with a soft boiled egg on top.
東京に「お台場」と言う街があります。
とても賑わう場所で、いつもたくさんの人で混んでいます。
そこに「お台場デックス東京ビーチ」と言う複合商業施設があります。
その中には、お化け屋敷、トリックアート、ゲームセンターなどがあります。
もちろん、ショッピングや食事も楽しめます。
私は、4階にあるたこ焼きミュージアムが好きです。
そこには、たくさんのたこ焼き屋さんがあって、それぞれのお店にいろいろな面白いたこ焼きがあります。
私の好きなやつは、半熟卵が上にのったやつです。
Odaiba in Tokyo (57)
There's a city called "Odaiba" in Tokyo.
It's a very busy area and always crowded.
There's a commercial complex called "Odaiba dDecks Tokyo" in there.
For proper nouns, you should capitalize the first letters of all the words.
固有名詞を大文字にする
You can enjoy a trick art museum, a haunted house and a game arcade.
You can also enjoy shopping, and eating.
もし動詞が２つしかリストされていない場合、カンマを含める必要はありません
If there are two verbs, you don't need to add a comma
I like the Takoyaki museum on the 4th floor.
There are many takoyaki shops and each shop has an interesting variety of takoyaki.
「Variety」は単数形で数えられる名詞です。そのため、「an」を前に加えます。
Variety is a singular, countable noun, so you should put a/an before it.
Example: a variety; an interesting variety
My favorite is the one with a soft boiled egg on top.
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This is great! I really enjoyed reading about Odaiba. Your writing ability is very good, only a few minor mistakes. Keep writing!
これは素晴らしいです！お台場について読んで楽しかったです。文章力は非常によいです。わずかな間違いがわずかありますが、書き続けてください！
March 6, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction and kind comment!
Odaiba in Tokyo (57)
There's a city called "Odaiba" in Tokyo.
It's a very busy area and always crowded.
There's a commercial complex called "Odaiba decks Tokyo" in there.
You can enjoy a trick art museum, a haunted house and a game arcade.
You can also enjoy shopping,(,) and eating.
Technically you don't need the comma here, but sometimes it's useful to have if you want to emulate a style of speaking, like pauses.
I like the Takoyaki museum on the 4th floor.
There are many takoyaki shops and each shop has an interesting variety of takoyaki.
My favorite is the one with a soft boiled egg on top.
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Mmmm. Now I'm hungry!
March 5, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction as always!
Odaiba in, Tokyo (57)
There's a citydistrict called "Odaiba" in Tokyo.
It's a very busy area and always crowded.
There's a commercial complex called "Odaiba decks Tokyo" in there.
You can enjoygo to a trick art museum, a haunted house, and a game arcade.
You can also enjoy shopping, and eating.
I like the Takoyaki museum on the 4th floor.
There are many takoyaki shops, and each shop has an interesting variety of takoyaki.
My favorite is the one with a soft boiled egg on top.
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Wow, I never knew about Odaiba or about the takoyaki museum there. I'd like to visit there!
March 5, 2024
It's a very lively spot. I'll recommend! Thank you so much for your correction!
Odaiba in, Tokyo
There's a citydistrict called "Odaiba" in Tokyo.
It's a very busy area and always crowded.
More natural: It's a very busy and crowded area.
There's a commercial complex called "Odaiba decks Tokyo" in there.
You can enjoy a trick art museum, a haunted house and a game arcade.
I would combine both sentences: There's a commercial complex called "Odaiba decks Tokyo," where you can visit a trick art museum, a haunted house and a game arcade.
You can also enjoy shopping,shop and eating there.
I like the Takoyaki mMuseum on the 4th floor.
There are many takoyaki shops and each shopone has interesting varietytheir own version of takoyaki.
My favorite is the one withone has a soft boiled egg on top.
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I love takoyaki! I went to Odaiba for the first time last year. 😊
March 5, 2024
Wow, did you like Odaiba? Thank you so much for your correction!
Odaiba in Tokyo
There's a city called "Odaiba" in Tokyo.
It's a very busy area and alwaysnd crowded area.
This structure of the sentence also gives the same meaning, and it is more short.
There's a commercial complexshops called "Odaiba decks Tokyo" in there.
Instead of "commercial complex" we can use "shops".
You can enjoy athe trick art museum, a haunted house and a game arcade.
You can also enjoy shopping, and eating.
I like the Takoyaki museum on the 4th floor.
There are many takoyaki shops and each shop has interesting variety of takoyaki.
My favorite is the one with a soft boiled egg on top.
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The food you mentioned at the end sounds tasty! I wanna try Japanese one day.
March 5, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction!
There's a commercial complex called "Odaiba dDecks Tokyo" in there.
You can enjoy a trick art museum, a haunted house and a game arcade.
You can also enjoy shopping, and eating.
There are many takoyaki shops, and each shop has an interesting variety of takoyaki.
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Nice job! I want to visit the takoyaki museum one day
March 5, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction!
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