nambatsuyoshi's avatar
nambatsuyoshi

Oct. 8, 2021

4
October 8th, 2021

I went to the dentist for a check up. I go every six months. I had no problem today. I felt good because I got my dentist to remove the tartar.
By the way, A big earthquake occurred in Tokyo last night. I live in Osaka, so I felt nothing. It was the biggest earthquake since the Great Tohoku Earthquake ten years ago. The global warming has progressed since around 1990 and the number of typhoons coming to Japan is increasing. I feel that the number of big earthquakes has increased in recent years. It feels like as if the earth is angry.


今日は、検診のため歯医者に行きました。6ヵ月ごとに行っています。特に問題はありませんでした。歯石も取ってもらってすっきりしました。
ところで、昨晩、東京で大きな地震がありました。10年前の東日本大震災以来の大きな地震だったようです。1990年頃から地球温暖化が進んで、日本に来る台風の数が増えています。近年、大きい地震が発生しているようにも感じます。まるで地球が怒っているかのようです。

Corrections

October 8th, 2021

I went to the dentist for a check -up.

I go every six months.

I had no problems today.

Alternatively: "They found no problems today".

I felt good because I gothad my dentist to remove the tartar.

Note that very few people use the word "tartar" in everyday life; most will simply say they went in for a teeth cleaning.

By the way, Aa big earthquake occurred in Tokyo last night.

The gGlobal warming has progressed since aroundthe 1990s and the number of typhoons coming tohitting Japan is increasing.

It is a bit more natural to say a typhoon is "hitting" an area; this applies to a lot of natural disasters.

I feel that the number of big earthquakes has increased in recent years.

It feels like as ifas though the eEarth is angry.

It may be correct to write "earth" with no upper case here, if you mean the literal ground, the earth itself. Writing "Earth" with a capital E here refers to the planet, not the ground. I feel it is more natural to refer to the planet, though.

"As if", "as though", etc.:

One could also write: "It is as if the Earth is angry". Using the verb "feel", it is more natural to use "as though", or "like", which is a bit more casual.

nambatsuyoshi's avatar
nambatsuyoshi

Oct. 9, 2021

4

Thank you!

October 8th, 2021


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I went to the dentist for a check up.


I went to the dentist for a check -up.

I go every six months.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I had no problem today.


I had no problems today.

Alternatively: "They found no problems today".

I felt good because I got my dentist to remove the tartar.


I felt good because I gothad my dentist to remove the tartar.

Note that very few people use the word "tartar" in everyday life; most will simply say they went in for a teeth cleaning.

By the way, A big earthquake occurred in Tokyo last night.


By the way, Aa big earthquake occurred in Tokyo last night.

I live in Osaka, so I felt nothing.


It was the biggest earthquake since the Great Tohoku Earthquake ten years ago.


The global warming has progressed since around 1990 and the number of typhoons coming to Japan is increasing.


The gGlobal warming has progressed since aroundthe 1990s and the number of typhoons coming tohitting Japan is increasing.

It is a bit more natural to say a typhoon is "hitting" an area; this applies to a lot of natural disasters.

I feel that the number of big earthquakes has increased in recent years.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It feels like as if the earth is angry.


It feels like as ifas though the eEarth is angry.

It may be correct to write "earth" with no upper case here, if you mean the literal ground, the earth itself. Writing "Earth" with a capital E here refers to the planet, not the ground. I feel it is more natural to refer to the planet, though. "As if", "as though", etc.: One could also write: "It is as if the Earth is angry". Using the verb "feel", it is more natural to use "as though", or "like", which is a bit more casual.

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium