Oct. 3, 2021
October 3rd, 2021
I rode my motorcycle to a row of metasequoia trees in Shiga. I go there every year, but no matter how many times I go, I like this place. On the way, the sunrise over Lake Biwa was also beautiful.
Here are some photos: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/bike/2021/20211003/w800/index-e.html
滋賀のメタセコイアの並木にバイクで行きました。毎年行っていますが、何回行ってもいいところです。途中、琵琶湖の朝焼けも綺麗でした。
こちらが写真です。
http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/bike/2021/20211003/w800/index-e.html
I rode my motorcycle to a row of metasequoia trees in Shiga.
I go there every year, but no matter how many times I go, I still like this place.
This was hard to correct. By using 'but' it means there should be some kind of contradiction... but there isn't! It's all positive. I inserted still to signify some kind of contradiction. butを使うと前に言ったことに反対する何かを言わないと変な感じがします。stillを使うと以前好きだったし、今も好きという気持ちを表現するからあっ分かった感じがするようになりました。
On the way, the sunrise over Lake Biwa was also beautiful.
Here are some photos: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/bike/2021/20211003/w800/index-e.html
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It looks very beautiful! I don't know metasequoia trees by name but they appear to be a variety of redwood. I like these trees in autumn.
Oct. 3, 2021
Thank you!
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October 3rd, 2021 |
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I rode my motorcycle to a row of metasequoia trees in Shiga. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I go there every year, but no matter how many times I go, I like this place. I go there every year, but no matter how many times I go, I still like this place. This was hard to correct. By using 'but' it means there should be some kind of contradiction... but there isn't! It's all positive. I inserted still to signify some kind of contradiction. butを使うと前に言ったことに反対する何かを言わないと変な感じがします。stillを使うと以前好きだったし、今も好きという気持ちを表現するからあっ分かった感じがするようになりました。 |
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On the way, the sunrise over Lake Biwa was also beautiful. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Here are some photos: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/bike/2021/20211003/w800/index-e.html This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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