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nambatsuyoshi

Oct. 28, 2021

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October 28th, 2021

There is a professional baseball team called "Nihon Ham". Mr. Shinjo will be appointed as the manager of the team next year. He is a hot-blooded man. I remembered his play about 22 years ago. A pitcher tried to give him an intentional walk, but he got a walk-off hit.
Here is the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HJhnEZmDU1g


There is a professional baseball team called "Nihon Ham". Mr. Shinjo will be appointed as the manager of the team next year. He is a hot-blooded man. I remembered his play about 22 years ago. A pitcher tried to give him an intentional walk, but he got a walk-off hit.
Here is the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HJhnEZmDU1g

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October 28th, 2021

There is a professional baseball team called "Nihon Ham".

Mr. Shinjo will be appointed as the manager of the team next year.

When someone is appointed a job or a position you just say "He/She was appointed (position)"

He is a hot-blooded man.

I remembered his play a play of his from about 22 years ago.

A pitcher tried to give him an intentional walk, but he got a walk-off hit.

Here is the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HJhnEZmDU1g

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Your English is good, just a few minor mistakes.

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nambatsuyoshi

Oct. 28, 2021

4

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October 28th, 2021


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There is a professional baseball team called "Nihon Ham".


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Mr. Shinjo will be appointed as the manager of the team next year.


Mr. Shinjo will be appointed as the manager of the team next year.

When someone is appointed a job or a position you just say "He/She was appointed (position)"

He is a hot-blooded man.


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I remembered his play about 22 years ago.


I remembered his play a play of his from about 22 years ago.

A pitcher tried to give him an intentional walk, but he got a walk-off hit.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Here is the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HJhnEZmDU1g


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