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nambatsuyoshi

Oct. 27, 2021

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October 27th, 2021

Today, I finished reading a novel which was written about 30 years ago. In the story, people listened to the music using the record. When people called their friend, they used a public telephone. In addition, many people smoked. The lifestyle has changed a lot in the past 30 years. If we look back now 30 years later, we may say that, did the cars run on gas 30 years ago?


今日、30年くらいまえの小説を読み終わりました。その小説では、人々はレコードで音楽を聴いていました。友達に電話をするときは公衆電話を使っていました。さらに、多くの人がタバコを吸っていました。もし、30年後に今を振り返ると、「30年前はガソリンで車が走っていたのか?」と思うかもしれません。

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October 27th, 2021

Today, I finished reading a novel which was written about 30 years ago.

In the story, people listened to the music using the records.

When people called their friends, they used a public telephone.

In addition, many people smoked.

The lifestyle has changed a lot in the past 30 years.

If we look back now 30 years later, we may say that, did theight say, "Did cars run on gas 30 years ago?"?

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Your English is good, only a couple of minor mistakes.

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nambatsuyoshi

Oct. 27, 2021

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Thank you!

October 27th, 2021


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Today, I finished reading a novel which was written about 30 years ago.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In the story, people listened to the music using the record.


In the story, people listened to the music using the records.

When people called their friend, they used a public telephone.


When people called their friends, they used a public telephone.

In addition, many people smoked.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The lifestyle has changed a lot in the past 30 years.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If we look back now 30 years later, we may say that, did the cars run on gas 30 years ago?


If we look back now 30 years later, we may say that, did theight say, "Did cars run on gas 30 years ago?"?

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