Oct. 23, 2021
October 23rd
A cold wind called the "Kogarashi" blew into the Kansai region for the first time this Autumn. It is the earliest on record. Kogarashi is a northerly wind with a speed of eight meters or more that blows from around October 23rd to around December 22nd.
今日は「木枯らし」という冷たい風が関西地方でこの秋始めて吹きました。これは観測史上最も早いです。木枯らしは10月23日頃から12月22日頃に吹く風速８メートル以上の北風です。
October 23rd
A cold wind called the "Kogarashi" blew into the Kansai region for the first time this Autumn.
It is the earliest on record.
This sentence needs a bit more information.
Kogarashi is a northerly wind with a speed of eight meters or more that blowegins from around October 23rd tountil around December 22nd.
Speed involves distance and time, so you would need to say something like, "... with a speed of eight meters (or metres) per second", or like, "... with a speed of 50 miles per hour".
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mjm
It is the earliest on record. that the Kogarashi has hit the region.
just "earliest on record" on it's own does not make full sense. It needs the context of "what".
Kogarashi is a northerly wind with a speed of eight meters per second or more that blowsis active from around October 23rd to around December 22nd.
i would not repeat "blows" - that is a bit colloquial.
Oct. 23, 2021
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A cold wind called the "Kogarashi" blew into the Kansai region for the first time this Autumn. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is the earliest on record. It is the earliest on record just "earliest on record" on it's own does not make full sense. It needs the context of "what". It is the earliest on record. This sentence needs a bit more information. |
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Kogarashi is a northerly wind with a speed of eight meters or more that blows from around October 23rd to around December 22nd. Kogarashi is a northerly wind with a speed of eight meters per second or more that i would not repeat "blows" - that is a bit colloquial. Kogarashi is a northerly wind with a speed of eight meters or more that b Speed involves distance and time, so you would need to say something like, "... with a speed of eight meters (or metres) per second", or like, "... with a speed of 50 miles per hour". |
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