Oct. 20, 2021
October 20th, 2021
Mt.Aso in Kyushu erupted today. Fortunately, there was no damage. The scenery around Mt.Aso is beautiful. I have been there about 14 years ago with my family. The two kids were still small.
今日、九州の阿蘇山が噴火しました。幸い被害はないようです。阿蘇のあたりの景色はとても綺麗です。14年前に家族とそこに行ったことがあります。2人の子供はまだ小さかったです。
October 20th, 2021
Mt.Aso in Kyushu erupted today.
Do you mean, "Mount Aso"? If so, this could be shortened to, "Mt. Aso" with a space between Mt and the actual name of the mountain, Aso
Fortunately, there was no damage.
The scenery around Mt. Aso is beautiful.
I have bewent there about 14 years ago with my family.
The two kids were still small at the time.
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mjm
Oct. 24, 2021
Thank you!
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Mt.Aso in Kyushu erupted today. Mt.Aso in Kyushu erupted today. Do you mean, "Mount Aso"? If so, this could be shortened to, "Mt. Aso" with a space between Mt and the actual name of the mountain, Aso |
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Fortunately, there was no damage. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The scenery around Mt.Aso is beautiful. The scenery around Mt. Aso is beautiful. |
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I have been there about 14 years ago with my family. I |
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The two kids were still small. The two kids were still small at the time. |
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