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Davin_Singh

Oct. 18, 2024

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October 18, 2024

Bonjour à tous, Je m'appelle Davinderpal Singh. J'habite au Canada. J'apprends la langue français. Ma langue maternelle est punjabi. Je parle aussi l'hindi et l'anglais. Ravi de vous rencontrer tous.

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October 18,18 octobre 2024

French date format: Number + month (without uppercase) + year
Cardinal numbers are used with months, except for "premier" (which is an ordinal one)

Bonjour à tous, Jje m'appelle Davinderpal Singh.

"je" isn't capitalized

J'habite au Canada.

J'apprends la langue française.

"langue" is feminine => françaisE

Ma langue maternelle est le punjabi.

"LE punjabi" (without article) for the same reason as "L'anglais"

Je parle aussi l'hindi et l'anglais.

"le hindi" (with <h> aspiré) is more common, although we do say "l'Hindu Kush", not really "le Hindu Kush", but both are right

Ravi de vous rencontrer tous.

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J'habite au Canada.


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J'apprends la langue français.


J'apprends la langue française.

"langue" is feminine => françaisE

Ma langue maternelle est punjabi.


Ma langue maternelle est le punjabi.

"LE punjabi" (without article) for the same reason as "L'anglais"

Je parle aussi l'hindi et l'anglais.


Je parle aussi l'hindi et l'anglais.

"le hindi" (with <h> aspiré) is more common, although we do say "l'Hindu Kush", not really "le Hindu Kush", but both are right

Ravi de vous rencontrer tous.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

October 18, 2024


October 18,18 octobre 2024

French date format: Number + month (without uppercase) + year Cardinal numbers are used with months, except for "premier" (which is an ordinal one)

Bonjour à tous, Je m'appelle Davinderpal Singh.


Bonjour à tous, Jje m'appelle Davinderpal Singh.

"je" isn't capitalized

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