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naoki

Feb. 25, 2022

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Oceans or mountains? Why?

I like the ocean better than the mountains because I like to swim and play on the beach.
Of course, I like the mountains, too. I often go to the mountains to enjoy nature throughout the year. But swimming in the ocean is more exciting for me. Maybe It's because the town I was born and raised is landlocked So I couldn't go to the sea very often when I was little.

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ODo you like oceans or mountains more? Why?

I like the ocean better than the mountains because I like to swim and play on the beach.

Of course, I like the mountains, too.

I often go to the mountains to enjoy nature throughout the year.

But swimming in the ocean is more exciting for me.

Maybe Iit's because the town I was born and raised is landlocked S, so I couldn't go to the sea very often when I was little.

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naoki

Feb. 28, 2022

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Thank you!

Oceans or mountains? Why?

I like the ocean better than the mountains because I like to swim and play on the beach.

Of course, I like the mountains, too.

I often go to the mountains to enjoy nature throughout the year.

But swimming in the ocean is more exciting for me.

Maybe Iit's because the town I was born and raised in is landlocked. So I couldn't go to the sea very often when I was little.

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naoki

Feb. 28, 2022

1

Thank you!

Oceans or mountains? Which do you prefer, and why?

I like the ocean better than the mountains because I like to swim and play on the beach.

Of course, I like the mountains, too.

I often go to the mountains to enjoy nature throughout the year.

But swimming in the ocean is more exciting for me.

Maybe Iit's because the town I was born and raised in, is landlocked. So I couldn't go to the sea very often when I was little.

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Cool text. I prefer the mountains because I’m boring and I can’t stand getting sand on my feet etc. Haha! But yeah, I would rather swim than go hiking for sure. ✌️👍

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naoki

Feb. 28, 2022

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I totally agree with you. Thank you for correcting my text.

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jogeumman

Feb. 28, 2022

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Oceans or mountains? Why?


Oceans or mountains? Which do you prefer, and why?

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ODo you like oceans or mountains more? Why?

I like the ocean better than the mountains because I like to swim and play on the beach.


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Of course, I like the mountains, too.


Of course, I like the mountains, too.

Of course, I like the mountains, too.

Of course, I like the mountains, too.

I often go to the mountains to enjoy nature throughout the year.


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But swimming in the ocean is more exciting for me.


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Maybe It's because the town I was born and raised is landlocked So I couldn't go to the sea very often when I was little.


Maybe Iit's because the town I was born and raised in, is landlocked. So I couldn't go to the sea very often when I was little.

Maybe Iit's because the town I was born and raised in is landlocked. So I couldn't go to the sea very often when I was little.

Maybe Iit's because the town I was born and raised is landlocked S, so I couldn't go to the sea very often when I was little.

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