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There is a saying, to be an official, you don't want to be rich, if you want to be rich, please don't be an official. This is no doubt right. Being an official means responsibility and giving. Everybody is watching you, and you have to treat yourself strictly. If you do something wrong, you will be in big trouble. So, don't just see the glory of a person who has a high position in politics, but see the giving he made. If you don't have the giving spirit, not being an official is not a bad thing. If you want to be rich, being an official is not the top choice. You can do business or something like that, you probably can get a nice income. Every occupation both has advantages and weaknesses. The key is what you really want from the bottom of your heart. When you set a clear goal, then do it. So, officials don't envy the boss's fortunes and the entrepreneur also doesn't envy the officials' political position. Since you have chosen a career, you should do it well with your heart.

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I would change the title to something more specific to what you are writing.

There is a saying, t"To be an official, you don'must not want to be rich, if you want to be rich, please don't. To be rich, you must not want to be an official."

This is no doubt rightsaying is wise.

Being an official means you must be responsibilityle and giving.

Everybody is watching you, andso you have to treat yourself strictly.must strictly adhere to all the rules.

If you do something wrong, you willcould be in big trouble.

So, don't just see the glory of a person who has a high position in politics, but see the giving he made.associated with an official, but rather the sacrifices he is making.

If you don't have the giving spirit, notare not self-sacrificing, then being an official ismay not a bad thingbe a good choice.

IOn the other hand, if you want to be rich, then being an official is not the top choice.may create conflicts.

You can do business or something like that, you probably can getInstead, you can choose to to into business and earn a nice income.

Every occupation both hahas its advantages and weaknessdisadvantages.

The key is finding out what you really want from the bottom of your heart.

WOnce you find out, then you should set a clear goal, then do and execute it.

So, oOfficials don't envy the boss's fortunes and the entrepreneur also doesn't envy the officials' political position.should not envy people's wealth and conversely, rich people should not envy the authority granted to officials.

SiOnce you have chosen a career've made the right choice, you should do it well with your heart.

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Jack

Sept. 26, 2020

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谢谢你的更改,从中我学到了很多的东西。再次向你表示感谢!

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There is a saying, to be anif you want to be a government official, you don't want towill not be rich, if you want to be rich, please don't be an official.

Official doesn't have quite the same connotation in English. I am assuming "Government Official", but I am not sure if you mean "statesmen", or ambassador, or civil servant. If you could think of a more descriptive word, it would be better.

This is no doubtNo doubt, this is right.

Correct, but a little awkward.

Being an official means responsibility and giving.enerosity. (Another more clear way of saying it.)

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Jack

Sept. 26, 2020

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谢谢你的修改,它对我帮助很大。谢谢!

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I would change the title to something more specific to what you are writing.

There is a saying, to be an official, you don't want to be rich, if you want to be rich, please don't be an official.


There is a saying, to be anif you want to be a government official, you don't want towill not be rich, if you want to be rich, please don't be an official.

Official doesn't have quite the same connotation in English. I am assuming "Government Official", but I am not sure if you mean "statesmen", or ambassador, or civil servant. If you could think of a more descriptive word, it would be better.

There is a saying, t"To be an official, you don'must not want to be rich, if you want to be rich, please don't. To be rich, you must not want to be an official."

This is no doubt right.


This is no doubtNo doubt, this is right.

Correct, but a little awkward.

This is no doubt rightsaying is wise.

Being an official means responsibility and giving.


Being an official means responsibility and giving.enerosity. (Another more clear way of saying it.)

Being an official means you must be responsibilityle and giving.

Everybody is watching you, and you have to treat yourself strictly.


Everybody is watching you, andso you have to treat yourself strictly.must strictly adhere to all the rules.

If you do something wrong, you will be in big trouble.


If you do something wrong, you willcould be in big trouble.

So, don't just see the glory of a person who has a high position in politics, but see the giving he made.


So, don't just see the glory of a person who has a high position in politics, but see the giving he made.associated with an official, but rather the sacrifices he is making.

If you don't have the giving spirit, not being an official is not a bad thing.


If you don't have the giving spirit, notare not self-sacrificing, then being an official ismay not a bad thingbe a good choice.

If you want to be rich, being an official is not the top choice.


IOn the other hand, if you want to be rich, then being an official is not the top choice.may create conflicts.

You can do business or something like that, you probably can get a nice income.


You can do business or something like that, you probably can getInstead, you can choose to to into business and earn a nice income.

Every occupation both has advantages and weaknesses.


Every occupation both hahas its advantages and weaknessdisadvantages.

The key is what you really want from the bottom of your heart.


The key is finding out what you really want from the bottom of your heart.

When you set a clear goal, then do it.


WOnce you find out, then you should set a clear goal, then do and execute it.

So, officials don't envy the boss's fortunes and the entrepreneur also doesn't envy the officials' political position.


So, oOfficials don't envy the boss's fortunes and the entrepreneur also doesn't envy the officials' political position.should not envy people's wealth and conversely, rich people should not envy the authority granted to officials.

Since you have chosen a career, you should do it well with your heart.


SiOnce you have chosen a career've made the right choice, you should do it well with your heart.

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