July 15, 2024
Failure of a time traveler
Finally, Taro Yamada completed a time machine. Excited, he decided to travel to the future riding on it. "OK, I'll see what the future will look like in 100 years!" Saying so, he pushed the button. At that moment, the machine shined dazzlingly.
Opening his eyes, he became convinced that he was in the future - flying cars, advertisements of holograms! On top of it, naked people! Everyone was walking without clothes! Taro hastily took off his outfits and tried to blend into them.
Soon enough, a policeman came close to him and asked, "Excuse me, why are you naked?" "What? don't you see them? They are walking naked!" bewildered, replied Taro. The policeman explained amazed, "Today is Transparent Suit Day, so they are wearing the newest."
Getting red in the face, he returned to the present and an innovative idea occurred. "I'll create transparent suits!"
This poor guy didn't notice something important. The day he visited the future was 101 years later, not 100 years, and The Naked Day 101 years from now fell on the tomorrow there.
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Finally, Taro Yamada completed a time machine.
Excited, he decided to travel to the future riding onwith it.
Excited, he decided to travel to the future with it.
"OK, I'll see what the future will look like in 100 years!"
Saying so, he pushed the button.
At that moment, the machine shined dazzlingly.
Opening his eyes, he became convinced that he was in the future - flying cars, holographic advertisements of holograms!
Opening his eyes, he became convinced that he was in the future - flying cars, holographic advertisements!
On top of it, naked people!
Everyone was walking without clothes!
Taro hastily took off his outfits and tried to blend into them.
Taro hastily took off his outfits and tried to blend in.
Soon enough, a policeman came close to him and asked, "Excuse me, why are you naked?"
"What?
dDon't you see them others?
Don't you see the others?
They are walking naked!"
bewildered, replied Taro, bewildered.
replied Taro, bewildered.
The policeman, amazed, explained amazed, "Today is Transparent Suit Day, so they are wearing the newestlatest fashion."
The policeman, amazed, explained, "Today is Transparent Suit Day, so they are wearing the latest fashion."
GettTurning red in the face, he returned to the present and and an innovative idea occurred to him.
Turning red, he returned to the present and and an innovative idea occurred to him.
"I'll create transparent suits!"
Thise poor guy didn't noticemissed something important.
The poor guy missed something important.
"didn't notice" is okay too, but "missed" is used a bit more commonly
The day he visited the future was 101 years later, not 100 years, and The Naked Day 101 years from now fell on the tomorrow there. The day he visited the future was 101 years later, not 100 years, and The Naked Day 101 years from now fell on the tomorrow there.
I don't quite understand this last part but the grammar is correct
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Failure of a time traveler |
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Finally, Taro Yamada completed a time machine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Excited, he decided to travel to the future riding on it.
Excited, he decided to travel to the future |
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"OK, I'll see what the future will look like in 100 years!" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Saying so, he pushed the button. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At that moment, the machine shined dazzlingly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Opening his eyes, he became convinced that he was in the future - flying cars, advertisements of holograms!
Opening his eyes, he became convinced that he was in the future - flying cars, holographic advertisements |
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On top of it, naked people! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Everyone was walking without clothes! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Taro hastily took off his outfits and tried to blend into them.
Taro hastily took off his outfits and tried to blend in |
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Soon enough, a policeman came close to him and asked, "Excuse me, why are you naked?" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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"What? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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don't you see them?
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They are walking naked!" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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bewildered, replied Taro.
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The policeman explained amazed, "Today is Transparent Suit Day, so they are wearing the newest."
The policeman, amazed, explained |
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Getting red in the face, he returned to the present and an innovative idea occurred.
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"I'll create transparent suits!" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This poor guy didn't notice something important.
Th "didn't notice" is okay too, but "missed" is used a bit more commonly |
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The day he visited the future was 101 years later, not 100 years, and The Naked Day 101 years from now fell on the tomorrow there. The day he visited the future was 101 years later, not 100 years, and The Naked Day 101 years from now fell on the tomorrow there. The day he visited the future was 101 years later, not 100 years, and The Naked Day 101 years from now fell on the tomorrow there. I don't quite understand this last part but the grammar is correct |
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