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ponta

Sept. 6, 2021

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Self-Introduction

I would like to change my self-introduction because the current one is written almost one year ago.

Hello, I am a university student in Japan. I am a junior now and majoring in aerospace engineering. I am learning English because it is necessary for research activities. It is also fun for me to learn new knowledge about English and to interact with others in English. I appreciate all of your corrections and advice.
Additionally, I want to help Japanese learners through this site. I am not a specialist in Japanese but I have been educated in Japanese and like reading books. If you have any questions about Japanese and Japan, I will answer as far as possible.

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Self-Introduction

Hello, I am a university student in Japan.

I am a junior now and majoring in aerospace engineering.

I appreciate all of your corrections and advice.

Additionally, I want to help Japanese learners through this site.

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ponta

Sept. 7, 2021

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Self-Introduction

I am a junior now and majoring in aerospace engineering.

I am learning English because it is necessary for research activities.

I appreciate all of your corrections and advice.

I am not a specialist in Japanese but I have been educated in Japanese and like reading books.

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ponta

Sept. 7, 2021

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Sept. 7, 2021

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Self-Introduction


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I would like to change my self-introduction because the current one is written almost one year ago.


I would like to change my self-introduction because the current one iwas written almost onea year ago. I would like to change my self-introduction because the current one was written almost a year ago.

I would like to changupdate my self-introduction because the current one iwas written almost onea year ago. I would like to update my self-introduction because the current one was written almost a year ago.

Hello, I am a university student in Japan.


Hello, I am a university student in Japan. Hello, I am a student in Japan.

It's fine to say "university student", but I don't believe any native speakers would introduce themselves as a "university student". They would just say that they're "a student" or "at uni/university" (in the US they would say they're at college).

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I am a junior now and majoring in aerospace engineering.


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I am learning English because it is necessary for research activities.


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I am learning English because it is necessary for research activities. I am learning English because it is necessary for research.

It is also fun for me to learn new knowledge about English and to interact with others in English.


It is also fun for me to learnacquire new knowledge about English and to interact with others in English. It is also fun for me to acquire new knowledge about English and to interact with others in English.

The original sentence is fine, but "learn knowledge" sounds rather awkward. You typically say you pick up knowledge, gain knowledge, acquire knowledge, and so on. More colloquially you could say "learn new things about English".

It is also fun for me to learn new knowledge about English and to interact with others in English. It is also fun for me to learn English and to interact with others in English.

I appreciate all of your corrections and advice.


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Additionally, I want to help Japanese learners through this site.


Additionally, I want to help Japanese learners throughon this site. Additionally, I want to help Japanese learners on this site.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am not a specialist in Japanese but I have been educated in Japanese and like reading books.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am not a specialist in Japanese but I have been educated in Japanese and I like reading books. I am not a specialist in Japanese but I have been educated in Japanese and I like reading books.

If you have any questions about Japanese and Japan, I will answer as far as possible.


If you have any questions about Japanese andor Japan, I will answer as far as possibleto the best of my ability. If you have any questions about Japanese or Japan, I will answer to the best of my ability.

If you have any questions about Japanese and Japan, I will answer as farhelpfully as possible. If you have any questions about Japanese and Japan, I will answer as helpfully as possible.

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