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wanderer

Aug. 9, 2024

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Obon(お盆)

In Japan, next week is Obon (a week around the Aug.13th every year),when many companies set holidays during the time.
It is said that the spirits of ancestors return during Obon. Many people go back to their home town to visit their graves,
and see their parents, relatives or old friends . Various festivals are also held around the time.
Of course, some people go out for traveling, some people, like me, just stay home watching TV as usual.

Last evening (the 8th) there was a big earthquake off the coast of Miyazaki Prefecture in Kyushu.
It is said this could be a sign of a massive earthquake in the Nankai Trough.

I’m not so interested in Olympic games.


お盆(Obon)

日本では、来週はお盆だ(毎年13日前後の1週間)。お盆休みにする会社が多い。
お盆には祖先の霊が戻ると言われている。多くの人が故郷に帰ってお墓参りをしたり、
親や親戚、それに旧友に会ったりする。期間中、様々な祭りも行われる。
もちろん、旅行に行く人もいるし、私のようにいつもどおり自宅でテレビを見て過ごす人もいる。
昨日(8日)の夕刻、九州の宮崎県沖で大きな地震があった。
南海トラフ巨大地震の前ぶれだ、とする報道も流れている。
オリンピックにはあまり興味が湧かない。

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Obon(お盆)

In Japan, nNext week is Obon in Japan (a week around the Aug.13th every year),when m. Many companies sethave holidays during theis time.

To me, it's more clear if you separate this into two sentences.

It is said that the spirits of ancestors return during Obon.

Many people go back to their home town to visit their ancestors' graves,
and see their parents, relatives or old friends .

"Many people go back to their home town to visit their graves" is grammatically correct, but it's unclear who "their" is referring to. It could mean either "many people's graves" or "their ancestors' graves." To make it more clear, I added "ancestors'" before "graves."

Various festivals are also held around theis time.

Of course, some people go out for traveling, but some people, like me, just stay home watching TV as usual.

LastYesterday evening (the 8th) there was a big earthquake off the coast of Miyazaki Prefecture in Kyushu.

It is said this could be a sign of a massive earthquake in the Nankai Trough.

I’m not so interested in Olympic games.

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Enjoy your Obon holidays!

I've been to an Obon festival once, and I enjoyed seeing the paper lanterns (提灯). This year I'll be going to the same Obon festival.

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wanderer

Aug. 12, 2024

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Thank you very much for your corrections and comments.
そうですね。when we think about Obon, it reminds me of ”盆踊り”、”精霊流し(しょうろうながし)”、”京都の大文字焼”、....
お盆が夏にあるのもなんとなく納得できる気がします。

Obon(お盆)

In Japan, next week is Obon (a week around the Aug.13th every year),when many companies set holidays during the time.

ALSO POSSIBLE: It is said that the spirits of ancestors return during Obonthis period.

Many people go back to their home towns to visit their ancestral graves,
and see their parents, relatives or old friends
.

Various festivals are also held around the time.

Of course, some people go out forto traveling, some people; other, like me, just stay home watching TV as usual.

Last evening (theon Aug. 8th) there was a big earthquake off the coast of Miyazaki Prefecture in Kyushu.

It is said this could be a sign of a massive earthquake in thealong Japan's 900 km Nankai Trough.

I’m not so interested in the Olympic games.

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Hope you prepare for the next big earthquake. Here in Shizuoka I have felt minor earthquakes . . . nothing big so far.

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wanderer

Aug. 10, 2024

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Thank you very much. I'm still afraid of 地震 and 雷。

Obon(お盆)

In Japan, nNext week is Obon (a week around the Aug.13th every year), in Japan, when many companies set holidays during theat time.

It is said that the spirits of our ancestors return during Obon.

Many people go back to their home town to visit their ancestor's graves,
and see their parents, relatives, or old friends .

Various festivals are also held around theis time.

Of course, some people go out for traveling, some people, like me, just stay home watching TV as usual.

Last evening (the 8th) there was a big earthquake off the coast of Miyazaki Prefecture in Kyushu.

It is said this could be a sign of a massive earthquake in the Nankai Trough.

I’m not so interested in Olympic games.

wanderer's avatar
wanderer

Aug. 10, 2024

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ありがとう。
Do you have any special events in summer ?

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shorter

Aug. 11, 2024

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そうね、ここではギリシャフェストとフォーク音楽祭が夏にある。大学時代住んでいる町が結構有名なジャズフェスティバルと「笑いのため」というコメディフェスティバルがある。どれも行ったことないけど

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wanderer

Aug. 11, 2024

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関係ないけど、夏で20℃ぐらいって、冬はかなり寒いってこと?
当然、蝉(せみ)なんていないよね。

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shorter

Aug. 12, 2024

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町によるね。今住んでいる町の冬がそんなに寒くない。大体は0℃以上。でも、大学時代住んでいた町が -30℃か-40℃になったことがある。そうね、蝉がいないんだ

In Japan, next week is Obon (a week around the Aug.13th every year), when many companies set holidays during theat time.

It is said that the spirits of our ancestors return during Obon.

Many people go back to their home towns to visit their ancestors' graves,
and
to see their parents, relatives or old friends .

Various festivals are also held around theis time.

Of course, some people go out for traveling, some people, (like me,) just stay home watching TV as usual.

LastYesterday evening (the 8th) there was a big earthquake off the coast of Miyazaki Prefecture in Kyushu.

It is said this could be a sign of a coming massive earthquake in the Nankai Trough.

wanderer's avatar
wanderer

Aug. 10, 2024

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Thank you very much for your corrections.

Obon(お盆)


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In Japan, next week is Obon (a week around the Aug.13th every year),when many companies set holidays during the time.


In Japan, next week is Obon (a week around the Aug.13th every year), when many companies set holidays during theat time.

In Japan, nNext week is Obon (a week around the Aug.13th every year), in Japan, when many companies set holidays during theat time.

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In Japan, nNext week is Obon in Japan (a week around the Aug.13th every year),when m. Many companies sethave holidays during theis time.

To me, it's more clear if you separate this into two sentences.

It is said that the spirits of ancestors return during Obon.


It is said that the spirits of our ancestors return during Obon.

It is said that the spirits of our ancestors return during Obon.

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Many people go back to their home town to visit their graves, and see their parents, relatives or old friends .


Many people go back to their home towns to visit their ancestors' graves,
and
to see their parents, relatives or old friends .

Many people go back to their home town to visit their ancestor's graves,
and see their parents, relatives, or old friends .

Many people go back to their home towns to visit their ancestral graves,
and see their parents, relatives or old friends
.

Many people go back to their home town to visit their ancestors' graves,
and see their parents, relatives or old friends .

"Many people go back to their home town to visit their graves" is grammatically correct, but it's unclear who "their" is referring to. It could mean either "many people's graves" or "their ancestors' graves." To make it more clear, I added "ancestors'" before "graves."

Various festivals are also held around the time.


Various festivals are also held around theis time.

Various festivals are also held around theis time.

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Various festivals are also held around theis time.

Of course, some people go out for traveling, some people, like me, just stay home watching TV as usual.


Of course, some people go out for traveling, some people, (like me,) just stay home watching TV as usual.

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Of course, some people go out forto traveling, some people; other, like me, just stay home watching TV as usual.

Of course, some people go out for traveling, but some people, like me, just stay home watching TV as usual.

Last evening (the 8th) there was a big earthquake off the coast of Miyazaki Prefecture in Kyushu.


LastYesterday evening (the 8th) there was a big earthquake off the coast of Miyazaki Prefecture in Kyushu.

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Last evening (theon Aug. 8th) there was a big earthquake off the coast of Miyazaki Prefecture in Kyushu.

LastYesterday evening (the 8th) there was a big earthquake off the coast of Miyazaki Prefecture in Kyushu.

It is said this could be a sign of a massive earthquake in the Nankai Trough.


It is said this could be a sign of a coming massive earthquake in the Nankai Trough.

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It is said this could be a sign of a massive earthquake in thealong Japan's 900 km Nankai Trough.

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I’m not so interested in Olympic games.


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