Bussiness tTrip in China Bussiness Trip in China

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Bussiness trip in China Business trip in China

Bussiness trip in China Business trip in China

From today until January of 24, I haveam on a business trip in China. From today until January of 24, I am on a business trip in China.

While I understand what you mean, 'to have' is not used with business trip. I think it would work better with 'to be on a business trip'.

From today until January of 24, I haveI am on a business trip in China until January 24. I am on a business trip in China until January 24.

This sounds more natural to me.

From today until January of 24, I haveI am on a business trip in China until January 24. I am on a business trip in China until January 24.

From today until January of 24, I have24th, I am on a business trip in China. From today until January 24th, I am on a business trip in China.

I will visit many factories of suppliers and I will talk about new products with my fellow workers and technical personnel. I will visit many factories of suppliers and I will talk about new products with my fellow workers and technical personnel.

You are talking about multiple factories so I assume there are multiple suppliers. If there is only one supplier you work with then maybe you could use 'many factories of our supplier'.

I will visit many factories of supplierof our supplier's factories and I will talk about new products with my fellow workers and technical personnel. I will visit many of our supplier's factories and I will talk about new products with my fellow workers and technical personnel.

This sounds more natural to me. If there is more than one supplier, you should say "suppliers' factories"

I will visit many factories of suppliersuppliers' factories, and I will talk about new products with my fellow workers and technical personnelians. I will visit many suppliers' factories, and I will talk about new products with my fellow workers and technicians.

I will visit many factories of my supplier and I will talk about new products with my fellow workers and technical personnel. I will visit many factories of my supplier and I will talk about new products with my fellow workers and technical personnel.

I hope that this year I will make a lot of good products with the factories of suppliers ! I hope that this year I will make a lot of good products with the factories of suppliers !

I don't really know how to explain it but it sounds more natural to use 'that' here. Also, you need to use the here with factories to specify what you'll be working together with.

I hope this yeare factories and I will make a lot of good products with factories of supplier together this year! I hope the factories and I will make a lot of good products together this year!

Again, this sounds more natural.

I hope that this year I will make a lot of good products with factories of supplier these suppliers' factories! I hope that this year I will make a lot of good products with these suppliers' factories!

I hope this year I will make a lot of good products with the factories of my supplier ! I hope this year I will make a lot of good products with the factories of my supplier!