Aug. 7, 2020
Obesity in Modern Life
All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?
Over the last few years, population of many countries have become overweight and obese. Today, this issue concerns adults and children alike. In Russia, 40 per cent of adult population is overweight. In this essay I will look at the main reasons for growing of obesity and propose some solutions.
One of the reasons is eating junk food. People often don’t have time to cook proper meal, therefore they make do with pre-prepared meals from grocery stores and supermarkets. In my city, every store offers a variety of snacks, burgers and other fast-food for customers. The solution is for the government to bring a law that will increase a tax fees for fast-food. As a result, people choose to buy healthier food for the same price.
Secondly, another reason is a poor eating culture in general. That is to say, many of us pick snacks on the run, dine in front of the television and eat too frequently during the day. For example, in yoga, it is recommended to have at least a eight- or 16-hour gap between meals. To tackle this problem, each individual must be aware of their eating habits. If it happens, we will have a society of healthier and more conscious people.
The last important reason is the lack of movement in our daily lives. It is common in modern world that most of the work requires people to sit on their chair. To compare, during evolution of man, our ancestors spend most of the time on feet hunting, looking for food and migrating. This difference in modern life consequently makes human body suffer from bunch of diseases, including obese as well. Addressing this issue involves people to make effort to add a bit physical activity. A short, 20-minute walk, gymnastics or yoga will be enough and hopefully is going to solve this problem.
To sum up, obesity is great problem of modern societies. Junk food and immoderate eating, along with the lack of activity in daily life, pose risks of gaining weight for many people. Unless people start to look after their diet, most of the population is going to become obese. I believe that peoples’ health in their hand and everyone should take steps to solve issue for themselves.
PS. When I finished, I realized that I didn't mention children in the essay at all...
Over the last few years, the population of many countries haves become overweight and obese.
In Russia, 40 per cent of the adult population is overweight.
In this essay I will look at the main reasons for the growingth of obesity and propose some solutions.
People often don’t have time to cook proper meals, therefore they make do with pre-prepared meals from grocery stores and supermarkets.
It is common in the modern world that most of the work requires people to sit on their chair.
To compare, during evolution of man, our ancestors spend most of the time on their feet hunting, looking for food, and migrating.
To sum up, obesity is a great problem of modern societies.
I believe that peoples’ should take their health in their hands and everyone should take steps to solve issue for themselves.
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Aug. 8, 2020
Thanks your the help!
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Obesity in Modern Life |
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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. |
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This problem affects both children and adults. |
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What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? |
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How could it be tackled? |
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Over the last few years, population of many countries have become overweight and obese. Over the last few years, the population of many countries ha |
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Today, this issue concerns adults and children alike. |
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In Russia, 40 per cent of adult population is overweight. In Russia, 40 per cent of the adult population is overweight. |
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In this essay I will look at the main reasons for growing of obesity and propose some solutions. In this essay I will look at the main reasons for the grow |
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One of the reasons is eating junk food. |
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People often don’t have time to cook proper meal, therefore they make do with pre-prepared meals from grocery stores and supermarkets. People often don’t have time to cook proper meals, therefore they make do with pre-prepared meals from grocery stores and supermarkets. |
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In my city, every store offers a variety of snacks, burgers and other fast-food for customers. |
|
The solution is for the government to bring a law that will increase a tax fess for fast-food. |
|
As a result, people choose to buy healthier food for the same price. |
|
Secondly, another reason is a poor eating culture in general. |
|
That is to say, many of us pick snacks on the run, dine in front of the television and eat too frequently during the day. |
|
For example, in yoga, it is recommended to have at least a eight- or 16-hour gap between meals. |
|
To tackle this problem, each individual must be aware of their eating habits. |
|
If it happens, we will have a society of healthier and more conscious people. |
|
The last important reason is the lack of movement in our daily lives. |
|
It is common in modern world that most of the work requires people to sit on their chair. It is common in the modern world that most of the work requires people to sit on their chair. |
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To compare, during evolution of man, our ancestors spend most of the time on feet hunting, looking for food and migrating. To compare, during evolution of man, our ancestors spend most of the time on their feet hunting, looking for food, and migrating. |
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This difference in modern life consequently makes human body suffer from bunch of diseases, including obese as well. |
|
Addressing this issue involves people to make effort to add a bit physical activity. |
|
A short, 20-minute walk, gymnastics or yoga will be enough and hopefully is going to solve this problem. |
|
To sum up, obesity is great problem of modern societies. To sum up, obesity is a great problem of modern societies. |
|
Junk food and immoderate eating, along with the lack of activity in daily life, pose risks of gaining weight for many people. |
|
Unless people start to look after their diet, most of the population is going to become obese. |
|
I believe that peoples’ health in their hand and everyone should take steps to solve issue for themselves. I believe that people (guessing at your intentions) |
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PS. |
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When I finished, I realized that I didn't mention children in the essay at all... |
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The solution is for the government to bring a law that will increase a tax fees for fast-food. |
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