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Everybody has different hobbies. Playing cards, drinking alcohol, exercising, traveling and so on, and these may all become hobbies of some people. In short, what hobbies are more beneficial and positive? I think there are two kinds of hobbies we should take priority the most. One is beneficial to our health, another is to improve our knowledge and skills, because these two kinds of hobbies are both meaningful things. So please be careful about your hobbies. If they are not able to bring you benefits to your body and your knowledge and skills, you better think about whether you should quit it.

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March 2, 2021

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Everybody has different hobbies.


Playing cards, drinking alcohol, exercising, traveling and so on, and these may all become hobbies of some people.


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In short, what hobbies are more beneficial and positive?


In short, what hobbies are morethe most beneficial and positive? In short, what hobbies are the most beneficial and positive?

I think there are two kinds of hobbies we should take priority the most.


I think there are two kinds of hobbies we should take prioritywe should prioritize these two kinds of hobbies the most. I think we should prioritize these two kinds of hobbies the most.

One is beneficial to our health, another is to improve our knowledge and skills, because these two kinds of hobbies are both meaningful things.


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OR "...meaningful ways to spend our time."

So please be careful about your hobbies.


So please be careful about yourwhich hobbies you choose. So please be careful about which hobbies you choose.

If they are not able to bring you benefits to your body and your knowledge and skills, you better think about whether you should quit it.


If they are not able to bring you benefits to your body and your knowledge and skills, you bettershould think about whether you should quit it. If they are not able to benefit your body and your knowledge and skills, you should think about whether you should quit it.

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