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I want to go to England to see the Three Graces and the Cotswolds.
From there, I'll be heading to Scotland, Portugal, then Spain, France, and finally Italy.
It's one dream... but I have very dreams.


Eu quero conhecer a Inglaterra, ver as três graças e Cotswolds.
De lá eu vou para a Escócia, Portugal depois Espanha, França e finalmente Itália.
Esse é um sonho... mas eu tenho muito sonhos

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I want to go to England to see the Three Graces and the Cotswolds.

From there, I'll be would heading to Scotland, Portugal, then Spain, France, and finally Italy.

I'd use "I would" because it sounds like you're daydreaming about the possibility, but it's not a vacation you have actually planned out

It's one dream... but I have vermany dreams.

This England

"This" is used when identifying a specific item from a larger group of items. Like "this cup" means the specific cup you're talking about. It's not used for proper nouns like countries, since those are unique.

From there, I'll be heading to Scotland, then Portugal, then Spain, France, and finally Italy.

"I'll be heading" sounds more like you have concrete plans, like you're describing a trip which you've already been to.

This usage of "then" where you're indicating that you're starting a sequence goes before the second item.

It's one dream... but I have vermany dreams.

"very" is used for strength, not quanitity.

This England


This England

"This" is used when identifying a specific item from a larger group of items. Like "this cup" means the specific cup you're talking about. It's not used for proper nouns like countries, since those are unique.

I want to go to England to see the Three Graces and the Cotswolds.


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From there, I'll be heading to Scotland, Portugal, then Spain, France, and finally Italy.


From there, I'll be heading to Scotland, then Portugal, then Spain, France, and finally Italy.

"I'll be heading" sounds more like you have concrete plans, like you're describing a trip which you've already been to. This usage of "then" where you're indicating that you're starting a sequence goes before the second item.

From there, I'll be would heading to Scotland, Portugal, then Spain, France, and finally Italy.

I'd use "I would" because it sounds like you're daydreaming about the possibility, but it's not a vacation you have actually planned out

It's one dream... but I have very dreams.


It's one dream... but I have vermany dreams.

"very" is used for strength, not quanitity.

It's one dream... but I have vermany dreams.

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