July 26, 2022
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B: What did you have for lunch yesterday?
A: Pasta with meat sauce from the convenience store!ใ
B: You really like convenience stores, right?
A: Yeah, it's easy.
B: But it's not very healthy!
A: Yeah, so I crushed up some tomatoes I had in the fridge to bulk up the meat sauce and make it healthier.
B: That sounds like a good idea.
A: Yeah. It tastes better with a lot of sauce.
B: Indeed. What about at night?
A: I ate dumplings.
My friend's family from junior high school runs a dumpling store, so I bought some dumplings there before and froze them and kept them.
B: Is it good?
A: They are delicious. Especially the sui-gyoza are delicious.
B: the sui-gyoza?
A: Umm, boiled dumplings.
B: Oh, I see.
A: Have you ever eaten it?
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Talking about Meals 2
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: What did you have for lunch yesterday?
A: Pasta with meat sauce from the convenience store!
B: You really like convenience stores, right?
A: Yeah, it's easy.
B: But it's not very healthy!
A: Yeah, so I crushed up some tomatoes I had in the fridge to bulk up the meat sauce and make it healthier.
B: That sounds like a good idea.
A: Yeah.
It tastes better with a lot of sauce.
B: Indeed.
What about at nightdid you have for dinner?
What did you have for dinner?
This sentence makes it more clear what the speaker is asking. It also sounds more natural in the US.
A: I ate dumplings.
My friend's family from junior high school runs a dumpling store, so I bought some dumplings there beforeearlier and froze them and kept themfor later.
My friend's family from junior high school runs a dumpling store, so I bought some dumplings there earlier and froze them for later.
This sounds more natural in the US.
B: Is itAre they any good?
B: Are they any good?
A: They a're delicious.
A: They're delicious.
US alternative
Especially the sui-gyoza are, they're very delicious.
Especially the sui-gyoza, they're very delicious.
This sounds more natural in the US.
B: tThe sui-gyoza?
B: The sui-gyoza?
A: Umm, boiled dumplings.
B: Oh, I see.
A: Have you ever eaten ithem?
A: Have you ever eaten them?
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B: What did you have for lunch yesterday?
A: Pasta with meat sauce from the convenience store!
B: You really like convenience stores, righthuh?
B: You really like convenience stores, huh?
huh is the same as right but more casual!
What about at nightfor dinner?
What about for dinner?
My friend's family from junior high school's family runs a dumpling store, so I bought some dumplings there before and froze them and kepta while ago and froze them.
My friend from junior high school's family runs a dumpling store, so I bought some dumplings there a while ago and froze them.
B: Is itAre those good?
B: Are those good?
A: Have you ever eaten ithem?
A: Have you ever eaten them?
Have you ever tried them? is also ok!
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