Dec. 10, 2025
Renovation Day 7
The worker came early to finish his work. I opened the door for him and joined morning meeting from home. I let him know some problems that I found, and as same as yesterday, I left my key to him and headed to the office.
In the evening, when I was home, everything looked very nice. A falling off tile was on its place and all tile gaps were filled, white and shiny. The dishwasher is aligned now, even though it doesn't fit perfectly.
He left a note that he will replace the chipped cabinet door to the new one. Also he noticed us the next step is caulking. Everything went smoothly and I was happy with that. Now I can give them 4.5 stars so far. Lol.
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I opened the door for him and joined my morning meeting from home. I opened the door for him and joined my morning meeting from home.
It is a specific meeting that you attend.
I let him know some problems that I found, and asthe same as yesterday, I left him my key to him and headed to the office.
I let him know some problems that I found, and the same as yesterday, I left him my key and headed to the office.
A falling off tiletile that had been falling off / that fell off was oin its place, and all tile gaps were filled, white and shiny.
A tile that had been falling off / that fell off was in its place, and all tile gaps were filled, white and shiny.
He left a note that he will replace the chipped cabinet door to thewith a new one.
He left a note that he will replace the chipped cabinet door with a new one.
Also he noticed uslet us know the next step is caulking.
Also he let us know the next step is caulking.
You could also use the future tense here "will be caulking"
Feedback
Overall, good! Just a few minor corrections for small words. Verb tenses are tricky because the narration is about what the worker and you did, but the effect is what you are seeing now. I think there could be some improvement, but that may just be my opinion.
Dec. 10, 2025
Thank you, Liag! I will take a look some grammar rule about it.
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Renovation Day 7 |
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The worker came early to finish his work. |
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I opened the door for him and joined morning meeting from home. I opened the door for him and joined my morning meeting from home. I opened the door for him and joined my morning meeting from home. It is a specific meeting that you attend. |
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I let him know some problems that I found, and as same as yesterday, I left my key to him and headed to the office.
I let him know some problems that I found, and |
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In the evening, when I was home, everything looked very nice. |
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A falling off tile was on its place and all tile gaps were filled, white and shiny.
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The dishwasher is aligned now, even though it doesn't fit perfectly. |
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He left a note that he will replace the chipped cabinet door to the new one.
He left a note that he will replace the chipped cabinet door |
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Also he noticed us the next step is caulking.
Also he You could also use the future tense here "will be caulking" |
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Lol. |
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Everything went smoothly and I was happy with that. |
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Now I can give them 4.5 stars so far. |
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