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naho2863

Aug. 24, 2022

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I definitely prefer winter, because I can use my soft blankets, drink hot chocolate that I love, stay outside without burning and in general don't melt from the summer heat.

Summer has its advantages and funny things to do, but most of the time I'm in my house.
And I can eat cold things like ice cream in winter too, so I don't worry about that.

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What'ich is bBetter Which is Better

What'ich is better Which is better

Could also say "Which one is better"

I definitely prefer winter, because I can use my soft blankets, drink hot chocolate that I love, stay outside without burning and in general don't melt from the summer heat.


I definitely prefer winter, because I can use my soft blankets, drink hot chocolate that I love, stay outside without getting sunburningt and in general dwon't melt from the summer heat. I definitely prefer winter, because I can use my soft blankets, drink hot chocolate that I love, stay outside without getting sunburnt and in general won't melt from the summer heat.

I definitely prefer winter, because I can use my soft blankets, drink the hot chocolate that I love, stay outside without burning and in general don'not melt from the summer heat. I definitely prefer winter, because I can use my soft blankets, drink the hot chocolate that I love, stay outside without burning and in general not melt from the summer heat.

Me, too!

I definitely prefer winter, because I can use my soft blankets, drink hot chocolate that I love, stay outside without burning and in general don'not melt from the summer heat. I definitely prefer winter because I can use my soft blankets, drink hot chocolate that I love, stay outside without burning and in general not melt from the summer heat.

The comma after 'winter' isn't needed. 'won't melt' is awkward. 'not melt' works better here.

Summer has its advantages and funny things to do, but most of the time I'm in my house.


Summer has its advantages and funny things to do, but most of the time I'm in my house. Summer has its advantages and fun things to do, but most of the time I'm in my house.

Summer has its advantages and funny things to do, but most of the time I'm stay in my house. Summer has its advantages and fun things to do, but most of the time I stay in my house.

Summer has its advantages and funny things to do, but most of the time I'm in my house. Summer has its advantages and fun things to do, but most of the time I'm in my house.

'fun' instead of 'funny' would be the proper word.

And I can eat cold things like ice cream in winter too, so I don't worry about that.


And I can eat cold things like ice cream in winter, too, so I don't worry about that. And I can eat cold things like ice cream in winter, too, so I don't worry about that.

And I can eat cold things like ice cream in winter, too, so I don't worry about things like that. And I can eat cold things like ice cream in winter, too, so I don't worry about things like that.

And I can eat cold things like ice cream in winter too, so I don't worry about that. And I can eat cold things like ice cream in winter too, so I don't worry about that.

This sentence is understandable, but a bit awkward. The second clause looks good. For the first clause, I would suggest changing the placement of 'in winter.' You could say, "In winter, I can eat cold things like ice cream'. Again, your original sentence is understandable, but I think that changing the word placement makes it appear more natural.

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