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Jan. 18, 2023

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2 great advices

In my life I've received lots of pieces of advice. But today I want to remark the two that changed my life.

1- Don't put all your egss in the same basket. This is so helpful. When I was younger (age 12-13) I had a friend who wanted me to be exclusive with her. To the point of "forget about all your friends and think just about me, you have to pick me over everything" I remeber she getting mad because I was watching TV and I didn't reply. I tried not to lose my friends but I ended up staying away from some of them. My life was only her until one day we had a fight and I realized I didn't have anyone else left. She was the only person I had. It was difficult for me to make friends again. Plus my supposed friend was spreading rumors about me. Now I learned to value and keep all my friends in touch but this advice works not only regarding to friends but everything in life. Sometimes people will let you down or you'll let them down, or things will go wrong and you'll need an extra hand. Putting all you effort in one single thing/person will never be a good idea.

2- Do not take things personally.
Most of the time people is not thinking about you. They're thinking about themselves. If someone is in the phone while you're speaking you never know what's on the phone of that person if it is having an emergency or your talk is simply not his/her cup of tea and that's fine! But it doesn't mean is actively going against to you. Of course sometimes there's people who have a problem with you. But in that case you think about yourself. If you have done something and if you haven't done anything well you don't take it personally! It is nothing do with you.
As a teacher I saw many angry faces, I went through many disturbing moments from my students and I never thought "it is about me" I had simply just pay attention to realize they were going through so many things that at the end I didn't gain anything grounding them or worst taking it personally(well most of the time they were upset because I was assigning homework or I told them to sit down or stop speaking with your classmates, I don't mind because they were children and teenagers. I can't imagine myself taking those childish behaviors personally). This idea might seems as I don't care if people disrespects me but is not the point.
I'm referring to minimal 'offenses' that I'm surprised how many people will take personally and start a whole war against the others. This advice helps to live a peaceful life not thinking of fighting with others.


I really got inspired lol. Maybe I should've divided it.

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This is so helpful.

When I was younger (age 12-13) I had a friend who wanted me to be exclusive with her.

I tried not to lose my friends but I ended up staying away from some of them.

My life was only her until one day we had a fight and I realized I didn't have anyone else left.

She was the only person I had.

It was difficult for me to make friends again.

Plus my supposed friend was spreading rumors about me.

Sometimes people will let you down or you'll let them down, or things will go wrong and you'll need an extra hand.

2- Do not take things personally.

They're thinking about themselves.

If you have done something and if you haven't done anything well you don't take it personally!

It is nothing do with you.

In my life I've received lots of pieces of advice.

This is so helpful.

I tried not to lose my friends but I ended up staying away from some of them.

She was the only person I had.

It was difficult for me to make friends again.

2- Do not take things personally.

They're thinking about themselves.

2 great advices

In my life I've received lots of pieces of advice.

This is so helpful.

I tried not to lose my friends but I ended up staying away from some of them.

She was the only person I had.

It was difficult for me to make friends again.

They're thinking about themselves.

In my life I've received lots of pieces of advice.

2- Do not take things personally.

I tried not to lose my friends but I ended up staying away from some of them.


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But in that case you think about yourself.


But in that case you have to think about yourself. But in that case you have to think about yourself.

But iIn that case, you should think about yourself. In that case, you should think about yourself.

But in that case you must think about yourself. But in that case you must think about yourself.

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The word "advice" is considered a non countable noun so its singular form and plural form are the same. Thus, we have to say something like "pieces of advice" to indicate more than one. Here's another option: - Some Great Advice

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This is the natural saying, in titles, definitely at the start of them at least, we will turn the number into the full word, and always capitalise !

In my life I've received lots of pieces of advice.


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In my life I've received a lots of pieces of advice in my life. I've received a lot of pieces of advice in my life.

More natural word order; always try to put the subject first, being you ‘I’.

But today I want to remark the two that changed my life.


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1- Don't put all your egss in the same basket.


1- Don't put all your egsgs in [the same | in one] basket. 1- Don't put all your eggs in [the same | in one] basket.

I don’t know about other countries, but in the US the standard proverb is “don’t put all your eggs in one basket.”

1-. Don't put all your egss in the same basket. 1. Don't put all your egss in the same basket.

1- Don't put all your egsgs in the same basket. 1- Don't put all your eggs in the same basket.

1- Don't put all your egsgs in the samone basket. 1- Don't put all your eggs in one basket.

This is a set phrase in the US.

1- Don't put all your egsgs in the same basket. 1- Don't put all your eggs in the same basket.

This is so helpful.


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When I was younger (age 12-13) I had a friend who wanted me to be exclusive with her.


When I was younger (age 12-13 years) I had a friend who wanted me to be exclusiveonly with her. When I was younger (age 12-13 years) I had a friend who wanted me to be only with her.

When I was younger (age 12-13), I had a friend who wanted me to be exclusive with her.to her to the point of where she said, "Forget about all your other friends and think just about me. You have to pick me over everything else." When I was younger (age 12-13), I had a friend who wanted me to be exclusive to her to the point of where she said, "Forget about all your other friends and think just about me. You have to pick me over everything else."

Oh, that doesn't sound good.

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To the point of "forget about all your friends and think just about me, you have to pick me over everything" I remeber she getting mad because I was watching TV and I didn't reply.


To the point of "forget about all your friends and think just about me, you have to pick me over everything"one else”. I remember sher getting mad because I was watching TV and I didn't reply. To the point of "forget about all your friends and think just about me, you have to pick me over everyone else”. I remember her getting mad because I was watching TV and I didn't reply.

To the point of "forget about all your friends and think just about me, you have to pick me over everything" I remeber sheI remember that she was getting madangry because I was watching TV and I didn't reply. I remember that she was getting angry because I was watching TV and didn't reply.

To the point of her saying; "forget about all your friends and just think just about me, you have to pick me over everything" I remember sher getting mad because I was watching TV and I didn't reply to her. To the point of her saying; "forget about all your friends and just think about me, you have to pick me over everything" I remember her getting mad because I was watching TV and I didn't reply to her.

My life was only her until one day we had a fight and I realized I didn't have anyone else left.


My life was onlycentred around her until one day we had a fight, and I realized I didn't have anyone else left. My life was centred around her until one day we had a fight, and I realized I didn't have anyone else left.

My life wasincluded only her, until one day, we had a fight and I realized that I didn't have anyone else left. My life included only her, until one day, we had a fight and I realized that I didn't have anyone else left.

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She was the only person I had.


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It was difficult for me to make friends again.


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Plus my supposed friend was spreading rumors about me.


Plus, my supposed friend was spreading rumors about me. Plus, my supposed friend was spreading rumors about me.

Plus, my supposed friend was spreading rumors about me. Plus, my supposed friend was spreading rumors about me.

PlusAlso, my supposed friend was spreading rumors about me. Also, my supposed friend was spreading rumors about me.

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Now I learned to value and keep all my friends in touch but this advice works not only regarding to friends but everything in life.


Now I have learnedt to value and keep in touch in touch with all my friends in touch butand this advice works not only with regarding to friends but to everything in life. Now I have learnt to value and keep in touch in touch with all my friends and this advice works not only with regard to friends but to everything in life.

Now I've learned to value and keep in touch with all my friends in touch but this advice works not only regarding towith friends but also with everything else in life. Now I've learned to value and keep in touch with all my friends but this advice works not only with friends but also with everything else in life.

Now I have learned to value and keep all my friends in touch but this advice works not only regarding/not only in regard to friends but to everything else in life. Now I have learned to value and keep all my friends in touch but this advice works not only regarding/not only in regard to friends but to everything else in life.

Sometimes people will let you down or you'll let them down, or things will go wrong and you'll need an extra hand.


Sometimes people will let you down or you'll let them down, or things will go wrong andor you'll need an extra hand. Sometimes people will let you down or you'll let them down, or things will go wrong or you'll need an extra hand.

Sometimes people will let you down or you'll let them down, or things will go wrong and you'll need an extra hand. Sometimes people will let you down or you'll let them down or things will go wrong and you'll need an extra hand.

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Putting all you effort in one single thing/person will never be a good idea.


Putting all you effort in one single thing/person willis never be a good idea. Putting all you effort in one single thing/person is never a good idea.

Putting all your effort into one single thing/ or person will never be a good idea. Putting all your effort into one single thing or person will never be a good idea.

Putting all you effort in one single thing/person willis never be a good idea. Putting all you effort in one single thing/person is never a good idea.

2- Do not take things personally.


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Most of the time people is not thinking about you.


Most of the time people isare not thinking about you. Most of the time people are not thinking about you.

Most of the time people isare not thinking about you. Most of the time people are not thinking about you.

Most of the time people isare not thinking about you. Most of the time people are not thinking about you.

They're thinking about themselves.


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If someone is in the phone while you're speaking you never know what's on the phone of that person if it is having an emergency or your talk is simply not his/her cup of tea and that's fine!


If someone is in the phone while you're speaking , you never know what's on the phone of that person if it is havingy that person is on the phone (or distracted), if there is an emergency or your talktalking to you is simply not his/her cup of tea and that's fine! If someone is in the phone while you're speaking, you never know why that person is on the phone (or distracted), if there is an emergency or talking to you is simply not his/her cup of tea and that's fine!

If someone is ion the phone while you're speaking , you will never know what's on the phone of thate person if it is havingwhether it is an emergency or your talking is simply not his/her cup of tea and that's fine! If someone is on the phone while you're speaking, you will never know what's on the phone of the person whether it is an emergency or your talking is simply not his/her cup of tea and that's fine!

If someone is ion the phone while you're speaking you never know what'o’s on the phone ofwith that person or if it is having an emergency or your talkif what you’re talking about is simply not his/her cup of tea and that's fine! If someone is on the phone while you're speaking you never know who’s on the phone with that person or if it is an emergency or if what you’re talking about is simply not his/her cup of tea and that's fine!

But it doesn't mean is actively going against to you.


But it doesn't mean he/she is actively going against toignoring you. But it doesn't mean he/she is actively ignoring you.

But iIt doesn't mean isthey are actively going against to you. It doesn't mean they are actively going against you.

But it doesn't mean the person is actively going against to you. But it doesn't mean the person is actively going against you.

Of course sometimes there's people who have a problem with you.


Of course sometimes there's are people who have a problem with you. Of course sometimes there are people who have a problem with you.

Of course, sometimes there's are people who have a problem with you. Of course, sometimes there are people who have a problem with you.

Of course sometimes there's people who havewill a problem with you. Of course sometimes there's people who will a problem with you.

If you have done something and if you haven't done anything well you don't take it personally!


If you have done something andor if you haven't done anysomething well you don't take it personally! If you have done something or if you haven't done something well you don't take it personally!

If you have done something andor if you haven't done anything, well, you don't need to take it personally! If you have done something or if you haven't done anything, well, you don't need to take it personally!

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It is nothing do with you.


It ihas nothing do with you. It has nothing do with you.

It ihas nothing to do with you. It has nothing to do with you.

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As a teacher I saw many angry faces, I went through many disturbing moments from my students and I never thought "it is about me" I had simply just pay attention to realize they were going through so many things that at the end I didn't gain anything grounding them or worst taking it personally.


This idea might seems as I don't care if people disrespects me but is not the point.


This idea might seems as I don't care if people disrespects me but that is not the point. This idea might seem as I don't care if people disrespect me but that is not the point.

This idea might seems as if I don't care ifwhether people disrespects me but it is not the point. This idea might seem as if I don't care whether people disrespect me but it is not the point.

This idea might seems as I don't care if people disrespects me but that is not the point. This idea might seems as I don't care if people disrespect me but that is not the point.

I'm referring to minimal 'offenses' that I'm surprised how many people will take personally and start a whole war against the others.


I'm referring to minimalsmall, insignificant 'offenses' that. I'm surprised as to how many people willould take it personally and start a whole war against the others. I'm referring to small, insignificant 'offenses'. I'm surprised as to how many people would take it personally and start a whole war against the others.

I'm referring to minimal '"offenses' that" over which I'm surprised at how many people will take personally and start a whole war against the others. I'm referring to minimal "offenses" over which I'm surprised at how many people will take personally and start a whole war against others.

I'm referring to minimal 'offenses' that I'm surprised how many people will take personally and start a whole war against the otherssomebody else. I'm referring to minimal 'offenses' that I'm surprised how many people will take personally and start a whole war against somebody else.

This advice helps to live a peaceful life not thinking of fighting with others.


This advice helps to liveead a peaceful life and not thinking of fighting with others. This advice helps to lead a peaceful life and not think of fighting with others.

This advice helps to live a peaceful life by not thinking of fighting with others. This advice helps to live a peaceful life by not thinking of fighting with others.

This advice helps one to live a peaceful life by not thinking of fightinginciting conflicts with others. This advice helps one to live a peaceful life by not thinking of inciting conflicts with others.

As a teacher I saw many angry faces, I went through many disturbing moments from my students and I never thought "it is about me" I had simply just pay attention to realize they were going through so many things that at the end I didn't gain anything grounding them or worst taking it personally(well most of the time they were upset because I was assigning homework or I told them to sit down or stop speaking with your classmates, I don't mind because they were children and teenagers. I can't imagine myself taking those childish behaviors personally).


As a teacher I saw many angry faces, as I went through many disturbing moments from my students and. I never thought "it is about me". I had simply justo pay attention to realize they were going through so many things that at the end I didn't gain anything grounding them or worste taking it personally(well m. Most of the time they were upset because I was assigning homework or I told them to sit down or stop speaking with your classmates,. I don't mind because they were children and teenagers. I can't imagine myself taking those childish behaviors personally). As a teacher I saw many angry faces as I went through many disturbing moments from my students. I never thought "it is about me". I had simply to pay attention to realize they were going through so many things that at the end I didn't gain anything grounding them or worse taking it personally. Most of the time they were upset because I was assigning homework or I told them to sit down or stop speaking with your classmates. I don't mind because they were children and teenagers. I can't imagine myself taking those childish behaviors personally).

I would suggest breaking this up into shorter sentences

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